Haiku

two feet off the ground… the tire swing attached and free engages maple 4/28/2018

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2018 6:30:00 PM

Your haiku brings back lovely memories of childhood, Kim. A winner for sure! Hugs, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 7:08:00 PM

Thanks, Carolyn! :):)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/28/2018 10:31:00 PM

It's a "thinker" -- makes me ponder. That's the seal and signature of a fine haiku. Nice!! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 5:48:00 AM

Thanks so much! <3 Kim

Elaine George

Date: 4/28/2018 7:02:00 PM

This Haiku paints a very visual picture, Kim. Well Done! Elaine

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2018 7:28:00 PM

Thank you, Elaine!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/28/2018 3:19:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2018 3:21:00 PM

Thanks, Line!