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Haiku - Mindless Brook

water wanders slips over and down rocks aimlessly- finding its way home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/6/2018 5:59:00 AM
Excellent haiku! Enjoyed.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/6/2018 9:35:00 AM
Susan, thanks for your remarks and noticing.
Date: 5/12/2018 7:37:00 PM
A most lovely haiku! Well done, my friend! Best regards. Pandita
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/13/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment. I was afraid it was a bit too cleverish for the pure haiku lovers. But I'll take any affirmation, delighted to accept yours.

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