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Haiku 1-2020

a crescent moon shines peeking between the tree branches Venus barely seen

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Rituko Shindo

Date: 1/1/2020 11:15:00 PM

I don't look up to the night sky or feel nature recently. Because I ’m busy. No, not really busy. I can't afford my heart. Your poems remind me of the precious world that is always around me.Thank you.

Carol Fillmore
Date: 1/2/2020 4:13:00 AM

you're welcome my friend! I always look up at the sky, always interesting and often so beautiful:)

Carol Fillmore

Date: 1/1/2020 9:48:00 PM

.Thank you Ritsuko! I really like your comments, very thoughtful:) I have the photo showing this, I will send it on FB messenger. This occurrence of the crescent moon and Venus was maybe on the 28th or 29th of December.

Rituko Shindo

Date: 1/1/2020 8:06:00 PM

I really like this haiku. One picture painting drawn in silver came to my mind. The universe is too big, but the universe that fits in the space surrounded by twigs is small. I feel the noble crescent light and the deep universe in the narrow space and cold.