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Haiku 06

wedding cake
filled with fruits and nuts
welcome  family

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Elizabeth Wesley

April 22, 2012 at 5:53 AM

The first thing I got was the family were part of the fruit and nuts! What a laugh today Phil, I think you probably infer that too! :)

Poet Destroyer A

April 21, 2012 at 5:59 PM

ha ha....I just bought 2 birthday cakes yesterday... and one was fruity... love your haiku... it has an mmmmmmimage...pd

Andrea Dietrich

April 16, 2012 at 11:37 PM

SO Sweet, Phyllis. Were you also making a joke about crazy families? We have an expression here about California being the land of "fruits and nuts" and I am curious if that expression is what you meant here in this haiku. Well, in any event, it's a GREAT haiku. Luv, Andrea

Phyllis Babcock

April 18, 2012 at 11:21 AM

I meant that some are sweet like fruit but some are crazy kinda nutty. All in all a good bunch. back in Saskatoon and hit freezing rain part of the way and is supposed to snow on thur when i head homne