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Haiku 03

over-riped apples decaying on the ground... wasp invasion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/6/2012 12:09:00 PM
Another good haiku. Just change "over-ripped" to "over-ripe". Have the apples been torn apart? That's what you are saying here.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:54:00 AM
thanks for the correction- I did not catch that.
Date: 2/3/2012 11:26:00 AM
I think I like this one best so far. VIvid picture comes to mind
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:55:00 AM
the wasps used to be around the apple trees and try and clean them up with wasps buzzing everywhere
Date: 2/1/2012 10:46:00 AM
Gods way of feeding them
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:56:00 AM
that is true but a mess they make

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