Haiku 03

over-riped apples
decaying on the ground...
wasp invasion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 12:09 PM
Another good haiku. Just change "over-ripped" to "over-ripe". Have the apples been torn apart? That's what you are saying here.
Babcock Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:54 AM
thanks for the correction- I did not catch that.
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 11:26 AM
I think I like this one best so far. VIvid picture comes to mind
Babcock Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:55 AM
the wasps used to be around the apple trees and try and clean them up with wasps buzzing everywhere
Loving Iii Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 10:46 AM
Gods way of feeding them
Babcock Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:56 AM
that is true but a mess they make
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