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Haiku -A Butterfly and a Rose

wings flutter on a moist petal rose nectar

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2017 7:34:00 PM

Beautiful!

Tim Smith

Date: 4/13/2017 8:22:00 AM

A lovely ku Charma...I can't wait for the warmer weather here.

Chris Green

Date: 4/13/2017 7:09:00 AM

It could be the dead of winter here and reading your poem it would feel like spring. Your words, so soft, so subtle but so beautiful and warming and comforting. There is an innocence about this that just creates a wonderful feeling when reading. Beautifully done my sweet friend.

White Wolf

Date: 4/13/2017 6:47:00 AM

Oh, I love it! Well done

Jan Allison

Date: 4/13/2017 6:39:00 AM

incredible imagery in so few lines Charma - a real beauty:-) hugs jan xx