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Haiku - the Flower

 

death came in the dawn
fringes of sweet petals die
fading like a dream


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December 5, 2012


Poetry/Haiku/the flower
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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/14/2012 10:54:00 AM

Beautiful words said in this Haiku. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Jack Horne

Date: 12/9/2012 7:37:00 AM

exquisite write here, my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2012 11:50:00 PM

i just love these short ones you do. This is gorgeous.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2012 6:34:00 PM

tender as the roses u so love and such emotion too Constance .. a stunning moment of thought luv ..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/6/2012 3:38:00 PM

Fading from a dream to a new reality. Eclipsing the greatest imaginations. Death holds such limited power!

Frank Polgar

Date: 12/6/2012 2:23:00 PM

Really like your haiku. Thanks for sharing.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/6/2012 9:32:00 AM

in nature we see birth and death, this wonderful Haiku depicts all of that perfectly, you are a wonder Constance

The Situation

Date: 12/6/2012 9:11:00 AM

Flowers have only days to live. There a birth, a beauty, and decay. They tell us where we've and where we're going. It Gods mysterious way of telling us gently.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2012 3:52:00 PM

Very descriptive work through the use of Haiku..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/5/2012 3:52:00 PM

Nice to speak to you today and hoping you are feeling well. Light & Love

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/5/2012 3:47:00 PM

This is another one of your beautiful writes my friend! I'm glad to hear it's just you enjoying to write sad poems and not being sad yourself! Thank you for letting me know this! Now I can just admire this awesome artistic side of you and the tremendous talent you have! This poem is an exact example of this wondrous talent, what an outstanding poem, Great Work!!