Haiku - Swirling Gems

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goldfish swirling gems
                                 in circles around around . . .
                                                           a turtle swims by
                                                           

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April 17, 2018


Poetry/haiku/swirling gems
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1013-787-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Haiku
sponsor, Mick Talbot

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/25/2018 1:41:00 AM
I wonder though how the turtle move to swirling around with the rest. :) Awesome. Congrats Constance.
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Date: 4/24/2018 8:42:00 AM
Love it! And the photo too! Splendid win :) Congratulations! xomo
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Date: 4/23/2018 9:50:00 PM
Lovely haiku, BW. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 4/23/2018 7:55:00 PM
Great haiku, Constance! You really captured the moment! Congrats on your top win :)
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Date: 4/23/2018 1:53:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the haiku contest, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/23/2018 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful. Clever closing with turtle.
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Date: 4/23/2018 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win BW with your wonderful haiku. :))
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Constance La France
Date: 4/23/2018 9:45:00 AM
Roy thank you for the congratulations and the compliment
Date: 4/23/2018 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your gold medal win Broken Wings. Nice to see the terapin/turtle... Mick
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Constance La France
Date: 4/23/2018 9:46:00 AM
Mick thank you for these great contests and my placement
Date: 4/18/2018 1:59:00 PM
- Well done, B.W. - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/23/2018 9:48:00 AM
Sun thank you for the visit and the encouragement
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