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haiku - summer storm

days dripping muggy the hot sun intense and hot - birds hidden in trees a sudden rain storm with winds howling and screaming- the garden now sighs _______________________ June 22, 2020 Poetry/Haiku/summer storm Copyright Protected, ID 20-1262-181-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Summer Haiku's sponsor, Tania Kitchin Second Place

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Date: 6/30/2020 3:00:00 PM
I love how the rain storm finally lets the garden sigh after intense heat. Congratulations on your win Constance. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 6/29/2020 8:52:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance!
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Date: 6/29/2020 3:03:00 PM
A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.
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Date: 6/29/2020 1:27:00 PM
Constance, Like Jeanne, I loved the sighing garden. Lovely haiku. Congratulations on your placement in the contest ~ John
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Date: 6/29/2020 9:30:00 AM
I love the image you penned of the heat then the garden sighing...loved it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/29/2020 6:18:00 AM
Hello mam, Congratulations on your win.:-) Loved the summer storm haiku. Keep inspiring.:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa
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Date: 6/29/2020 3:53:00 AM
congrats on your win! the words really have the gravity of storm
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Date: 6/29/2020 1:59:00 AM
Back with congratulation Constance.. Great win..
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Date: 6/28/2020 5:36:00 PM
lovely haiku Constance, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2020 5:04:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Constance:-) Loved this. Heartiest congratulations!
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Date: 6/28/2020 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Constance, just as it has brought those days around. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/28/2020 3:47:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on your winning placement with your descriptive and clever haiku!
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Date: 6/24/2020 6:46:00 PM
I really like how you did your set. The second one especially. I love it, Dear Heart.
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Date: 6/23/2020 1:37:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku Constance.. Good luck..
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Date: 6/22/2020 6:12:00 PM
Beautiful summer haiku. Good luck in the contest.
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