Haiku - Senryu
True desert memories of my time spent in the Libyan desert. (Very early 60's)
The link re. the last senryu gives the details of how a young soldier lost his life by ignoring orders. Not a friend of mine, but we were comrades in arms.
HAIKU & SENRYU
night time desert... cold
can freeze... belies the hot days
no moon... pitch black night
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daytime desert... hot
the sun takes no prisoners
yet nature survives
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tortoise... chameleons
scorpions... puff adders... flies
shy desert wonders
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two four week tours
my work... I endured
free time exploring
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North Africa
unhospitable deserts
watermelons... cool
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there are hidden fears
world war two ammunitions
bomb... mines... shells... killers
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look... don't touch... report
standing orders .... don't deny
one did and died
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The link below will take you to a page where the young soldier's death is recorded. Please note this was not entered as html, I used converter entities to get it up in the html format. If I have broken the rules I apologise and will remove it but for those interested copy it now.
http://www.farmersboys.com/Roll_of_Honour_Pages/G_Evans.htm
<a href="http://www.farmersboys.com/Roll_of_Honour_Pages/G_Evans.htm">Farmers Boys</a>
Copyright © Mick Talbot | Year Posted 2017
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