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Haiku - Sea

the blue ship about to put to sea my heart leaps up 05.09.18 2nd place "Sea / Ocean" hosted by M. Talbot 05.12.18

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Silent One

Date: 5/23/2018 12:41:00 PM

Interesting ship for you..

Moon Flower
Date: 5/24/2018 7:49:00 PM

Thank you, S.O. :) It's nice to read you here.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/14/2018 5:19:00 PM

Expectant...color of the sea...well done, Moon!

Moon Flower
Date: 5/21/2018 12:14:00 PM

Thank you, James. :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/14/2018 7:00:00 AM

For sure; be positive and ride the waves not submerged. Toss those blues overboard. Very well said.

Moon Flower
Date: 5/14/2018 9:28:00 AM

Hi Joe. You've pressed the right button! Thanks for dropping by. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 3:09:00 PM

Oh, that is a great contrast, a ship being put down into the water as your heart leaps up. Love that. Congrats for the win.

Moon Flower
Date: 5/14/2018 12:38:00 AM

I love this comment of yours, Andrea. Very profound. :) Thanks!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2018 7:07:00 PM

congrats on your win Moon Flower:-) hugs jan xx

Moon Flower
Date: 5/12/2018 11:13:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. :) hugs

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/12/2018 3:04:00 PM

I can feel the excitement in this one! Fabulously done. Congratulations on your win! xomo :)

Moon Flower
Date: 5/12/2018 11:13:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen. :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/12/2018 2:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, MF, the imagery is fabulous... eve

Moon Flower
Date: 5/12/2018 11:16:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2018 8:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great second place in the contest, Moon Flower :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower
Date: 5/12/2018 10:46:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/11/2018 11:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Moon Flower. Well done.

Moon Flower
Date: 5/11/2018 11:40:00 PM

Thank you, Line. :)