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Haiku - Movement

 
in the swirling sky
a hundred geese fly in form-
tree sparrows flutter


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May 6, 2020


Poetry/haiku/movement
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1249-262-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest, A Haiku With Movement
sponsor, Tania Kitchin

Second Place

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Beata Agustin Date: 5/10/2020 6:22:00 AM Wow! Congrats! God bless you. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/10/2020 9:23:00 AM Beata, thanks for the visit and congrats _Constance

Eve Roper Date: 5/10/2020 2:26:00 AM Back with big congratulations. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/10/2020 9:23:00 AM Thanks _Constance

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/9/2020 9:50:00 PM wow, you did an amazing job here, Constance. Very well deserved win. Congratulations Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/10/2020 9:23:00 AM Andrea, thanks for the visit and for the compliment and congratulations _Constance

Susan Ashley Date: 5/9/2020 8:58:00 PM A wonderful contrast is drawn between the graceful flight of geese and the flitting of sparrows. Fantastic imagery, Constance. Congratulations on your excellent win in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/10/2020 9:24:00 AM Susan, thanks for the congratulations and for the compliment on my haiku _Constance

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/9/2020 4:05:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Wish I was a bird and could fly away. Enjoy your win and day........... Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/10/2020 9:25:00 AM Psula, thanks for the congratulations and for the comment, me too _Constance

Paul Callus Date: 5/9/2020 4:03:00 PM You paint a striking polaroid picture, Constance. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/10/2020 9:25:00 AM Paul, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations_Constance

Sam Kauffman Date: 5/9/2020 1:33:00 PM Congratulations on your win. We are on the migration path for geese and see this picture all the time. You captured it beautifully. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/9/2020 3:54:00 PM Sam, thanks for the congratulations. I was actually inspired by a huge group of geese flying home.. I heard their loud calls in the sky over my home and went out to watch their perfect but loud formation _ Constance

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/9/2020 9:30:00 AM Very pretty, Constance! Congratulations! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/9/2020 3:54:00 PM Kim, thanks for the congratulations and compliment _Constance

Mohan Chutani Date: 5/9/2020 6:27:00 AM Constance, a swirling placement. Congrats. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/9/2020 3:55:00 PM Mohan, thank you so much for the congrats _Constance

Tania Kitchin Date: 5/9/2020 5:56:00 AM Constance congratulations on your winning placement, this is gorgeous, love the last line! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/9/2020 3:56:00 PM Tania, thanks for a great contest and my wonderful placement, honored, I love those little sparrows on branches _Constance

Edward Ibeh Date: 5/7/2020 11:20:00 PM Wonderful haiku, Constance:-) Soupmail for you. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/9/2020 3:57:00 PM Edward, thanks for the compliment _Constance

Jack Horne Date: 5/7/2020 2:39:00 PM beautiful haiku, my friend. I hope you & cute kitty are keeping well x Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/9/2020 3:57:00 PM Jack, thanks for the compliment, oh me and Snuggles are doing great thank you _Constance

Eve Roper Date: 5/7/2020 12:18:00 AM Great visual haiku, Dear Heart, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/9/2020 3:58:00 PM Eve, thanks for the compliment and the hugs _Constance