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Haiku - Iku - Number 62 Thru 67 Revised

#62 bright hovering birds sip from honeysuckle cups - a tea monger's cart #63 bees gather pollen their legs and wings a blur - golden alchemy #64 frost punks spring's success winter knife's the heart of fall - summer love can't last #65 man cuts word in half and smiles - haiku 'less is more' puzzle this 'sippi' #66 pictures overwhelm - give others a blank page they will vote for you #67 fishing bob jiggles hook plumbing the depths with bait - look! spring's in her step Brian Johnston March 8,2017 Poet's Notes: Question: Does 'golden alchemy' bring a picture to your mind? OK, I'll admit that you might have to think a little! : -) How is that picture different from 'a tea monger's cart? ' Is it even possible for one image to be more real than another? Isn't everything (you think you see) just a 'model of reality' constructed by your brain from sensory input? Let's raise our glass to 'models! ' Some of them are so sexy and cute even! Ha! ? Concrete images (that are never concrete) can be so boring and are rarely more than a spark, mostly monkeys with typewriters or emperor's "new clothes!" Words may seem beautiful to you, but if they do not come from the author's original intention to communicate a specific idea or feeling, they are garbage I think, just monkeys typing and "Fake News!"

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Date: 3/2/2017 8:03:00 PM
I sure enjoyed these, Brian. My favorite is number the first one. So cute!
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Date: 3/1/2017 2:18:00 PM
Love the haikus :)
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