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Haiku - Dreaming

full moon sleepless night cold winter wind chills blooms tight- deep sleep a faint howl 3/15/2019 Poetry Contest: 'Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku-' Sponsored By: Dear Heart My Yorkie sound asleep beside me having nightmares. He has separation disorder, he howls when I leave him alone .

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 3/27/2019 11:26:00 AM

Ah! those sleepless nights. 'faint howl' Nicely done

Constance La France

Date: 3/18/2019 10:49:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent haiku~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/18/2019 4:29:00 AM

You see them fidgeting in their sleep sometimes, perfect image Eve,, congrats. Tom.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2019 11:05:00 PM

This is wonderful Eve, I especially loved your second line. Congratulations on your first place win! Happy St. Patrick's Day! xxoo : )

Warren Doll

Date: 3/17/2019 10:13:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on your win, Eve. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/17/2019 7:33:00 PM

Congratulations Eve, on your top win for your lovely haiku!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2019 6:46:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/17/2019 6:39:00 PM

Nice imagery Eve, congratulations on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2019 6:22:00 PM

Lots of great description, Eve. Congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2019 2:53:00 PM

- Beautiful haiku, Eve :) - Congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/17/2019 11:42:00 AM

lots of content in a few words. Imagery seamless!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/17/2019 2:00:00 AM

Good going - I need to read about this contest - good luck with your insomnia alert haiku! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/16/2019 2:31:00 PM

Well done Eve, best wishes...

Jan Allison

Date: 3/16/2019 4:52:00 AM

oh how sweet is that final line Eve:-) hugs Jan the captcha is CRY! :-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/16/2019 2:00:00 AM

"a faint woof" made me smile, as we have deer who have a nervous cough that sounds like a woof sometimes. Darling haiku! Good luck in the contest, Eve.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/16/2019 1:15:00 AM

Hi Eve, This is just beautiful! The image you created with words in breathtaking. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/16/2019 12:32:00 AM

A beautiful Haiku!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/15/2019 10:04:00 PM

Oh the play on the howling at the moon is just excellent. Good luck in the contest! xomo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/15/2019 10:22:00 PM

Oh I am Yorkie sitting right now! ;)

Eve Roper
Date: 3/15/2019 10:09:00 PM

It is windy, dark and cold outside and my Yorkie is sound asleep growling. I wonder if he is chasing squirrels up a tree his favorite pastime. Thank you , Maureen for the encouragement. Hugs Eve ~`*