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haiku - dreaming

full moon sleepless night 
cold winter wind chills blooms tight-
deep sleep a faint howl 

3/15/2019


Poetry Contest: 'Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku-' 
Sponsored By: 	Dear Heart

My Yorkie sound asleep beside me having nightmares.
He has separation disorder, he howls   when I leave him alone .

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Date: 3/27/2019 11:26:00 AM
Ah! those sleepless nights. 'faint howl' Nicely done
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Date: 3/19/2019 3:45:00 AM
Probably I'm suffering from separation disorder too. :) Lovely haiku.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/19/2019 8:11:00 AM
That you are my friend ,, that you are...
Date: 3/18/2019 10:49:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent haiku~
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Date: 3/18/2019 4:29:00 AM
You see them fidgeting in their sleep sometimes, perfect image Eve,, congrats. Tom.
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Date: 3/17/2019 11:05:00 PM
This is wonderful Eve, I especially loved your second line. Congratulations on your first place win! Happy St. Patrick's Day! xxoo : )
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Date: 3/17/2019 10:13:00 PM
Great haiku. Congratulations on your win, Eve. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Date: 3/17/2019 7:33:00 PM
Congratulations Eve, on your top win for your lovely haiku!
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:46:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:39:00 PM
Nice imagery Eve, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:22:00 PM
Lots of great description, Eve. Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/17/2019 2:53:00 PM
- Beautiful haiku, Eve :) - Congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2019 11:42:00 AM
lots of content in a few words. Imagery seamless!
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Date: 3/17/2019 2:00:00 AM
Good going - I need to read about this contest - good luck with your insomnia alert haiku! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/16/2019 2:31:00 PM
Well done Eve, best wishes...
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Date: 3/16/2019 4:52:00 AM
oh how sweet is that final line Eve:-) hugs Jan the captcha is CRY! :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/16/2019 2:00:00 AM
"a faint woof" made me smile, as we have deer who have a nervous cough that sounds like a woof sometimes. Darling haiku! Good luck in the contest, Eve.
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Date: 3/16/2019 1:15:00 AM
Hi Eve, This is just beautiful! The image you created with words in breathtaking. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/16/2019 12:32:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku!!!
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Date: 3/15/2019 10:04:00 PM
Oh the play on the howling at the moon is just excellent. Good luck in the contest! xomo
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 3/15/2019 10:22:00 PM
Oh I am Yorkie sitting right now! ;)
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/15/2019 10:09:00 PM
It is windy, dark and cold outside and my Yorkie is sound asleep growling. I wonder if he is chasing squirrels up a tree his favorite pastime. Thank you , Maureen for the encouragement. Hugs Eve ~`*