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Haiku - Bashful

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~ daylight... due her nap - kissed the bashful sea's rough cheek... as he blushed crimson ~ ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Haiku No Titles Theme Nature" Poetry Contest, Mick Talbot, Sponsor.

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Joseph May
Date: 4/19/2018 9:13:00 PM
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Beautiful haiku Greg..Congrats on your win
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2018 10:11:00 PM
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Thank you so much, my friend! :-)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/18/2018 11:12:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/19/2018 10:11:00 PM
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Thank you, Susan! :-) <3
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/18/2018 6:18:00 PM
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this is how I like to write mine too, Gregory. Line did a blog recently that said peronifiction is strongly frowned on by the "IT" people who do KU. I beg to differ with MY opinion. For me, this is one of the best on the list. Congrats for your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 8:22:00 PM
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I wholeheartedly agree, Andrea ... Haiku has had countless variations and adaptations over the centuries, and I find beauty and substance in all of them. To me poetry is about emotion and enjoyment, and to put strict rules and guidelines on structure is putting restrictions on creativity and beauty. I respect the traditionalist views, I just happen to not agree with them. Let poetry find its own way, and let the soul speak its own language ... ENCOURAGE creativity and art, don't limit or restrict it. Thank you, Friend! :-) <3
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Roy Pett
Date: 4/18/2018 5:37:00 AM
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Congratulations on your well deserved win Gregory with your exceptional Haiku. :))
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 8:19:00 PM
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Very kind of you, Roy - thank you so much!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 3:18:00 AM
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Congratulations, Greg on you win as usual.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 8:18:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Subimal.
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/17/2018 1:50:00 PM
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What a lovely pairing in this lovely haiku Greg. Congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:43:00 AM
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That's so sweet of you, Jean ... blessings, My Dear friend! :-) <3
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/17/2018 11:50:00 AM
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Sweetness! Darling Haiku. Congratulations on your win <3 xomo!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:43:00 AM
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Thank you for the heartfelt sugar, Dear Mo - I'll mix it with my morning chai, and think of you! :-) <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2018 10:42:00 AM
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Lovely and romantic! Ahhh! Congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:41:00 AM
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Thank you so very much, Kim - I'm pleased you liked it! :-) <3
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2018 9:11:00 AM
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lovely haiku Greg, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:41:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Jan - blessings! :-) <3
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/17/2018 9:03:00 AM
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Your poems, Greg, often suggest a remarkable 'classical' sense of nature, beauty, and our place in this world, so finely done--congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:40:00 AM
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That's very kind of you to say, LJ, and a thoughtful comment, indeed. Many thanks and blessings, my friend! :-)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/17/2018 8:05:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:40:00 AM
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Thank you very much, Anne-Lise! :-) <3
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2018 7:58:00 AM
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Congrats on your bronze medal win, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:39:00 AM
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Thank you much, Line! :-)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/17/2018 7:52:00 AM
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Congratulations Greg. Tom.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:39:00 AM
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Thank you, Tom! :-)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/8/2018 11:58:00 PM
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Gorgeous haiku! Love this interpretation of a sunset...so creative, Gregory! Enjoyed :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/11/2018 8:15:00 AM
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That's so kind of you, Laura - thank you very much! :-)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/8/2018 7:30:00 PM
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Utterly beautiful, Greg.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/11/2018 8:14:00 AM
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Thank you, Buddy - so appreciated! :-) <3
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/7/2018 4:28:00 PM
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Beautiful Haiku.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 5:14:00 PM
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I'm pleased you like this one, Dale ... many kind thanks, my friend!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/7/2018 11:23:00 AM
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Lovely! and in just 3 lines, too.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 5:13:00 PM
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Thank you so much, my friend ... I greatly appreciate the kind words! :-) <3

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