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~   daylight... due her nap -


               kissed the bashful sea's rough cheek... 


                              as he blushed crimson   ~





~ 3rd Place ~  in the "Haiku No Titles Theme Nature" Poetry Contest, Mick Talbot, Sponsor.

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Date: 4/19/2018 9:13:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Greg..Congrats on your win
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/19/2018 10:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! :-)
Date: 4/18/2018 11:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/19/2018 10:11:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! :-) <3
Date: 4/18/2018 6:18:00 PM
this is how I like to write mine too, Gregory. Line did a blog recently that said peronifiction is strongly frowned on by the "IT" people who do KU. I beg to differ with MY opinion. For me, this is one of the best on the list. Congrats for your win.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 8:22:00 PM
I wholeheartedly agree, Andrea ... Haiku has had countless variations and adaptations over the centuries, and I find beauty and substance in all of them. To me poetry is about emotion and enjoyment, and to put strict rules and guidelines on structure is putting restrictions on creativity and beauty. I respect the traditionalist views, I just happen to not agree with them. Let poetry find its own way, and let the soul speak its own language ... ENCOURAGE creativity and art, don't limit or restrict it. Thank you, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/18/2018 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Gregory with your exceptional Haiku. :))
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 8:19:00 PM
Very kind of you, Roy - thank you so much!
Date: 4/18/2018 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg on you win as usual.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 8:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Subimal.
Date: 4/17/2018 1:50:00 PM
What a lovely pairing in this lovely haiku Greg. Congratulations.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:43:00 AM
That's so sweet of you, Jean ... blessings, My Dear friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/17/2018 11:50:00 AM
Sweetness! Darling Haiku. Congratulations on your win <3 xomo!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:43:00 AM
Thank you for the heartfelt sugar, Dear Mo - I'll mix it with my morning chai, and think of you! :-) <3
Date: 4/17/2018 10:42:00 AM
Lovely and romantic! Ahhh! Congrats!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:41:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Kim - I'm pleased you liked it! :-) <3
Date: 4/17/2018 9:11:00 AM
lovely haiku Greg, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 4/17/2018 9:03:00 AM
Your poems, Greg, often suggest a remarkable 'classical' sense of nature, beauty, and our place in this world, so finely done--congrats!
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:40:00 AM
That's very kind of you to say, LJ, and a thoughtful comment, indeed. Many thanks and blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 4/17/2018 8:05:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:40:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise! :-) <3
Date: 4/17/2018 7:58:00 AM
Congrats on your bronze medal win, Gregory.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:39:00 AM
Thank you much, Line! :-)
Date: 4/17/2018 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations Greg. Tom.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:39:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! :-)
Date: 3/8/2018 11:58:00 PM
Gorgeous haiku! Love this interpretation of a sunset...so creative, Gregory! Enjoyed :)
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 3/11/2018 8:15:00 AM
That's so kind of you, Laura - thank you very much! :-)
Date: 3/8/2018 7:30:00 PM
Utterly beautiful, Greg.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 3/11/2018 8:14:00 AM
Thank you, Buddy - so appreciated! :-) <3
Date: 3/7/2018 4:28:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 5:14:00 PM
I'm pleased you like this one, Dale ... many kind thanks, my friend!
Date: 3/7/2018 11:23:00 AM
Lovely! and in just 3 lines, too.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 5:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend ... I greatly appreciate the kind words! :-) <3