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Haiku - Autumn

twirling wind trumpets golden leaves rustle in waltz veiled autumn tiptoes Autumn: I believe autumn to be a season that symbolizes the circle of life with withering leaves in howling wind. The way nature embraces change with beauty to bloom again has a blessed serendipity that inspires me. August 5, 2020 Traditional Haiku - Nature Themed Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin ~Premiere Contest Winner: 10th Place

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/10/2020 7:47:00 AM

Your explanation as gorgeous as your haiku, congratulations for your win! xomo

John Watt

Date: 8/9/2020 10:41:00 AM

Love your musical references with trumpets and waltzes. Autumn is like the third movement of a symphony (in 3/4 time, like a waltz) where the year is close to ending and the seasons modulate from sowing the harvest into a time of rest and closure that winter represents. Excellent haiku, my dear friend, I congratulate your win ~ John

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2020 1:17:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations on your win aditi:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/8/2020 12:37:00 PM

It is a beautiful autumn haiku and I love your explanation of how you feel towards the season. Congrats on your placement

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2020 10:00:00 AM

I really really like yours, Aditi. One of my favorites here because truly this is a very beautiful and symbolic season of nature. congrats for your win.

Mark Koplin

Date: 8/7/2020 7:02:00 PM

I love your poem! Congratulations on your win

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/7/2020 1:08:00 PM

So visual Aditi. I too love the autumn wind with its crispness echoing the summer wind looking toward the winter wind and the time of rest. Congratulations dear friend. blessings and hugs...