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Haiku - 6-29-2016

Haiku – 6/29/2016 white heat - yellow glow dehydrates shrunken shadows baking city streets John G. Lawless 6/29/2016

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Date: 7/1/2016 12:39:00 AM
Nice haiku. It sure is sizzling in Beirut.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/1/2016 7:57:00 PM
...in more ways then one.... appreciate your stopping by to read and comment.
Date: 6/30/2016 11:55:00 AM
Nice one, John.~karam~
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John Lawless
Date: 7/1/2016 7:55:00 PM
Thank you Karam
Date: 6/30/2016 8:45:00 AM
very cool KU, John!! I love it. See you after my little holiday if I can't find a way to do Soup in oregon.
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Date: 6/30/2016 12:28:00 AM
Combination of sharp observational process and poetic skill ... enviable ...
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John Lawless
Date: 6/30/2016 6:50:00 AM
Thank you. Appreciate your looking in on my haiku, they are a lonely breed - seeking attention but denying it.

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