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Haiku (Sweet Dreams)

summer slumbers deep as winter breathes icy tales sugar-frosted dreams *** for Rick Parise's 'Haiku You' contest

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James Fraser

Date: 8/11/2010 11:44:00 AM

So much said with so few words. That's the magic with Haiku poetry >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/4/2010 3:50:00 PM

Very creative Haiku that should do well in the contest...Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I received HM in a contest...Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/1/2010 7:39:00 PM

mmm sugar frosted dreams--I just love that!! it definitely ended this perfect haiku! I'm sure this will be a winner, Sharon :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2010 1:25:00 PM

Wow, this one is awesome!! Luv, andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2010 11:57:00 AM

nice and sweet on the dreams, the image is caught with the sweetest view of nature. Have a nice one, Sidney Lee AnnM.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/1/2010 11:21:00 AM

Great write..I agree , I feel it too...Michael

Amy Green

Date: 6/1/2010 9:14:00 AM

Wow- I can FEEL this one. Great job!