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Haiku (A Sweet Lament)

exquisite droplets pendants poised in sweet lament tears of morning dew

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2010 12:48:00 PM

oh,my goodness. Another one I had missed! A lovely haiku, Sharon. I just saw what you said about me in Chris's blog from yesterday. That was so sweet of you to mention me. By the time I went back there he had announced what I would have voted: everyone a winner! (And you one of those at the top!) Luv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/8/2010 12:55:00 AM

Oh another gem of yours that I missed! I think you said it in your first line-- this is exquisite-- the imagery that pops into mind here are definitely vivid-- enjoyed how each line flows so well to the next :) -- hugs nikko :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/29/2010 5:20:00 PM

enjoyed reading!

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/25/2010 7:02:00 AM

A soothing write, picturing the morning dew Sharon.. love Wilma Ps: I reckon there is no harm in being wishful.. I'm also in that frame of mind :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/24/2010 6:00:00 PM

Reminds me of the song "Morning Dew" by the Grateful Dead. Extremely fine haiku here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

James Fraser

Date: 8/24/2010 3:09:00 PM

The richness and freshness of morning dew is another of natures gems, captured in your Haiku Sharon >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/24/2010 10:00:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Sharon. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

John Rhinem

Date: 8/23/2010 11:38:00 PM

~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, to All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Blessed & Beautiful of Tomorrows Dear Sharon Tideswell, Amid The Fragrance of The Dew of, 'Beautiful & Precious Love;" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 8/23/2010 11:34:00 PM

Smile ~ Rereading this beauty and thinking of what my eyes have beheld thus far, in regards unto "Your Beautiful Poetry" causes myself to smile for, "A Treasure Such As Yourself Lovely Sharon, Is Soo Very Absolutely Rare!!!" ~ I need to make to go back and begin to read all of "Your Wonderful Work Dear Lady" ~ ....Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 8/23/2010 11:28:00 PM

Smile ~ "You Amaze Myself Beautiful Sharon Tideswell; Soo Soft Your Soul; Soo Very Precious You Are!!!" ~ I love the seemingful perhaps symblance within this vividly colourful and brilliant canvas' brushing; a fave beyond a doubt!!! ~ I hope that life has been treating "Your Beautiful Soul" perfectly dear lady and that, "All of 'Your Precious Hearts Dreams' Have Been Being Answered for 'You Dear'" ~ ....Cont:)

Kris Walters

Date: 8/23/2010 6:59:00 PM

Beautiful, beautiful! A feeling, an image- so very nicely done! hugs, Kris

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/23/2010 6:53:00 PM

A sweet lament nice oxymoron.Enjoyed the haiku with nice images, Sharon

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/23/2010 3:10:00 PM

Great Haiku Sharon... loving picture you paint with your words..always Michael