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Haiku (A Secret Shared)

skipping on tip toes sharing secrets with the wind a hush of crisp leaves ** for 'A leaf in the wind (Autumn)' sponsored by Rick Parise

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/24/2010 1:54:00 PM

Really like your second line! It make this piece really magical I think. Congratulations on getting a win in this contest.

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/15/2010 4:17:00 PM

Nice autumn haiku! Liked tha last line especially! Yours Matthew Anish

James Fraser

Date: 9/12/2010 2:56:00 PM

Many congratulations Sharon on your win in Rick's fine contest with this gem of a Haiku >> James :)

Rick Parise

Date: 9/10/2010 8:33:00 PM

Sharon you can lock your contest/change date~click on contest title on admin. page~Rick

Michael Hornschuch

Date: 9/10/2010 1:15:00 PM

nice haiku, brought a grin to my chin...

Rick Parise

Date: 9/8/2010 4:24:00 PM

Hi Sharon, I had a type-o on a poem for your contest, all has been fixed~Rick

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/8/2010 12:03:00 AM

The more I read it, the more I like it. "a hush of crisp leaves"...very well written.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 3:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sharon in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Raj Nandy

Date: 9/6/2010 9:25:00 PM

A NICE ONE DEAR SHARON ! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems . - Raj

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:40:00 PM

beautiful, congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 11:13:00 AM

Wow, Sharon, did I see this before. I just love this. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2010 4:25:00 AM

Sharon, congrats on your win in the contest :) Wilma

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2010 4:24:00 AM

Sgaron, congrats on your win in the contest :) Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2010 10:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning haiku Sharon. Great imagery!

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/5/2010 7:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Sharon. Peace, love, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 7:02:00 PM

Congratulations on the 14th place win in the contest, Sharon

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/5/2010 6:07:00 PM

An original approach of childhood skipping on tip toes. I used a child's vision in my haiku too:). Congratulations on your win, dear Sharon. Love, iolanda

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/5/2010 5:48:00 PM

Congrats, Sharon. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 5:11:00 PM

Congrats Sharon on your winning poem in Rick's contest... a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight my friend with luv..

Kris Walters

Date: 9/1/2010 5:57:00 PM

Oh, I lovel this! skipping on tip toes- just love the sound and image it conjures. this is lovely! best wishes and hugs, kris

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/31/2010 1:45:00 PM

Hi Sharon :) -- quick hi ;) -- heehee-- enjoyed this lovely haiku of yours that evokes such a carefree feeling for me...;) see you around....hugs nikko :)

James Fraser

Date: 8/31/2010 1:12:00 PM

Of to the park I go this Autumn to live this lovely Haiku >> James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2010 5:49:00 PM

A nice haiku on the falling leaf contest. Good luck, Sharon

James Peranteau

Date: 8/30/2010 4:53:00 PM

I'm loving these Autumn poems....somebody help...I dislike the heat so much...ty for the coming inspiring lust of mine...the cold !! james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/30/2010 4:07:00 PM

LUV this one Sharon.. good luck in the new contest.. my entry is "Resplendent Rhapsody".. my wedding photos are now posted on my new blog..luv.. was only allowed ten as the systems will not let more than ten now.. and we have hundreds from Italy.. enjoy..luv..