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Haiku (A Secret Shared)

skipping on tip toes
sharing secrets with the wind
a hush of crisp leaves




** for 'A leaf in the wind (Autumn)'
sponsored by Rick Parise

Copyright © Sharon Tideswell | Year Posted 2010

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Brandee Augustus Date: 9/24/2010 1:54:00 PM Really like your second line! It make this piece really magical I think. Congratulations on getting a win in this contest. Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 9/15/2010 4:17:00 PM Nice autumn haiku! Liked tha last line especially! Yours Matthew Anish Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/12/2010 2:56:00 PM Many congratulations Sharon on your win in Rick's fine contest with this gem of a Haiku >> James :) Login to Reply

Michael Hornschuch Date: 9/10/2010 1:15:00 PM nice haiku, brought a grin to my chin... Login to Reply

Hyle Chu Date: 9/8/2010 12:03:00 AM The more I read it, the more I like it. "a hush of crisp leaves"...very well written. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/7/2010 3:56:00 AM Congratulations on your win Sharon in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Raj Nandy Date: 9/6/2010 9:25:00 PM A NICE ONE DEAR SHARON ! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems . - Raj Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 9/6/2010 4:40:00 PM beautiful, congrats on your win Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/6/2010 11:13:00 AM Wow, Sharon, did I see this before. I just love this. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/6/2010 4:25:00 AM Sharon, congrats on your win in the contest :) Wilma Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/6/2010 4:24:00 AM Sgaron, congrats on your win in the contest :) Wilma Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/5/2010 10:14:00 PM Congratulations on your winning haiku Sharon. Great imagery! Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 9/5/2010 7:53:00 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest, Sharon. Peace, love, Audrey Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/5/2010 7:02:00 PM Congratulations on the 14th place win in the contest, Sharon Login to Reply

Iolanda Scripca Date: 9/5/2010 6:07:00 PM An original approach of childhood skipping on tip toes. I used a child's vision in my haiku too:). Congratulations on your win, dear Sharon. Love, iolanda Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 9/5/2010 5:48:00 PM Congrats, Sharon. Nice going. Ralph Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/5/2010 5:11:00 PM Congrats Sharon on your winning poem in Rick's contest... a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight my friend with luv.. Login to Reply

Kris Walters Date: 9/1/2010 5:57:00 PM Oh, I lovel this! skipping on tip toes- just love the sound and image it conjures. this is lovely! best wishes and hugs, kris Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 8/31/2010 1:45:00 PM Hi Sharon :) -- quick hi ;) -- heehee-- enjoyed this lovely haiku of yours that evokes such a carefree feeling for me...;) see you around....hugs nikko :) Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 8/31/2010 1:12:00 PM Of to the park I go this Autumn to live this lovely Haiku >> James :) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/30/2010 5:49:00 PM A nice haiku on the falling leaf contest. Good luck, Sharon Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 8/30/2010 4:53:00 PM I'm loving these Autumn poems....somebody help...I dislike the heat so much...ty for the coming inspiring lust of mine...the cold !! james Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/30/2010 4:07:00 PM LUV this one Sharon.. good luck in the new contest.. my entry is "Resplendent Rhapsody".. my wedding photos are now posted on my new blog..luv.. was only allowed ten as the systems will not let more than ten now.. and we have hundreds from Italy.. enjoy..luv.. Login to Reply

Wayne Sapp Date: 8/30/2010 11:58:00 AM Lovely image from childhood. I like this very much! Login to Reply