Haiku2 0424

brown moth wings labor under heavy rain take flight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mcclellan Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 8:10 AM
And April is usually spring rains... lol I wonder if those moths are feeling a break or not... Good job. I like it.
Austin Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 2:56 PM
Alas, a short enough life, thanks to the rain, becomes even shorter. Love, daver
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 11:47 AM
You are so good on haiku Ann....well said. - oxox Anne-Lise
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