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Haiku-Rolling In the Dough

 rolling in the dough
status quo
I’m watching bread grow




5/3/5
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Oct.10.2018
Baker's Dozen Poetry
Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy


Placed 2'nd

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Warren Doll Date: 10/19/2018 7:43:00 AM Brilliant haiku, WW. Congratulations on your win. Warm wishes~ Warren Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/18/2018 8:30:00 PM Back with congrats on your win in the contest with this haiku. Rarely have so few words revealed so many layers of meaning. Well-done ~ gw Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/15/2018 4:55:00 AM Invite me in, if you don't it'll be a sin, congrats on your win, WW, Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 10/14/2018 6:50:00 PM Yep! You are rolling in the dough now!! :) Congratulations Winged Warrior, on this win. Love and Bread. ~ Brandy Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/14/2018 2:49:00 PM Great win in the contest, WW. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 10/14/2018 2:19:00 PM Fun rhyme, WW - congrats on your podium win. Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 10/14/2018 10:47:00 AM Congratulations for your win WW ! :) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/14/2018 10:34:00 AM love this, ^^W^^ , congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 10/12/2018 8:04:00 AM Hi John, good luck in the contest my friend. A wonderful Haiku from your pen. I have to stop stopping by these baking writes, I have no self-control. The Michelin man heads for the kitchen once more. Love the content John. A Haiku fave. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 10/11/2018 9:06:00 AM If you are Rolling in Dough, simply watching Bread grow??? Can I Roll too, watch the Dough grow.?? Lol. This is cute and clever. Your thoughts bring a smile my Warrior with Wings. :) Love and cooking dough. ~ Brandy Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 10/11/2018 6:42:00 AM Short, sweet and to the point. That bread in the photo looks delicious, too. Great work here and good luck. Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 10/10/2018 6:36:00 PM ….and I noticed there was one slice missing from that bottom pic. Enjoy! Excellent and clever WW. Love-n-bread CM Login to Reply

Roy Pett Date: 10/10/2018 6:05:00 PM Brilliant, very cleverly written, good luck in contest my friend. :)) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/10/2018 5:53:00 PM cool Ku and I love that first picture!! Login to Reply

Wendy Watson Date: 10/10/2018 2:02:00 PM A very clever play on words, WW. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/10/2018 2:02:00 PM - I think they are done now ..... I can smell the freshly baked bread .... very great done, W.W. :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 10/10/2018 1:53:00 PM Great one WW :) Have a nice day ! Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/10/2018 1:15:00 PM Call me when its done. I'll bring my knife and fork and the gorgonzola. Love it, Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 10/10/2018 1:11:00 PM That's about the most dough I'll ever see. : ) Nice one. Much luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/10/2018 12:57:00 PM Such a clever double entendre! Best of luck in the contest! ~ Gershon Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/10/2018 12:47:00 PM I have a feeling that the rising dough will be disrupting the status quo, WW :) Of course, I acknowledge the fact that the existing state of affairs between yeast and dough has contributed to many a lovely and tasteful loaf! Regards // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 10/16/2018 8:27:00 AM Back with congratulations on a deserved podium finish! Regards // paul