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Haiku-River Sprite

smooth rounded pebbles...
pale tears of a river sprite
shed eons ago

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/23/2014 8:37:00 AM

What a lovely haiku this is!Bravo! Pandita

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/1/2013 1:01:00 AM

Love this one and love the magical thought of a river sprite.

The Situation

Date: 4/13/2012 11:56:00 PM

a haiku by my might.

Ann Roske

Date: 4/12/2012 2:02:00 PM

This is a beautiful image!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2012 8:21:00 PM

Margaret, thanks for popping in here today. So cool to see you. please put up a new poem for me to read! and happy easter to you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2012 11:24:00 PM

Hi, there, Margaret. thanks for stopping by my lavender poem!! How are you doing?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2012 9:29:00 AM

oh Margaret have so missed u luv.. so happy to see u and hear from u.. ,iss your glorious words of poetry my friend.. hope u wll stay here with your family ..luv..

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/30/2012 12:13:00 AM

COME BACK...I wrote a dang poem about you and you LEAVE ME!~:) I hope you are doing well!~

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 1/19/2012 3:56:00 AM

Oh Margaret Oh Margaret where have you gone? Yes Kash is right we miss you!

Kash Poet

Date: 1/1/2012 6:44:00 AM

You are missed here Marg.Wish you a very very Happy and Prosperous New Year.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2011 8:24:00 PM

oh I see you won with this too. Belated Congratulations. I really loved this one.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/10/2011 9:18:00 PM

What an imaginative idea. Very nice. thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/8/2011 3:16:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Margaret! Kim

David Williams

Date: 12/7/2011 12:00:00 PM

Margaret congrats on your win, great imagery..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2011 11:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Triplet" contest Margaret. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 12/7/2011 10:02:00 AM

Wonderful haiku Marg.Congratulations on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2011 9:33:00 PM

I LOVE this imagery, Margaret. Great metaphor. And glad you liked Toilers at the Trench. I find Brian's contests are a great way to get my "old stuff" shown again to the few people who care to review the winners' lists.

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/5/2011 7:11:00 PM

Love the pretty picture you have painted with your words, Margaret. Kim

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