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Haiku-Night hunt

still waters a lost girl watches the wolf's reflection

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/25/2013 7:09:00 PM
Thanks so much for your awsome comment! After reading it, I just had to check out your haikus. This one is perfect. I can't recall reading a better! Wishing you inspiration.
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Date: 1/21/2013 12:06:00 PM
The scene is painted with a few words..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 11/28/2012 12:24:00 AM
A good different one here. The reflection should be a nice one. I have a thing for wolves which makes me like the animal a lot. -- Sean
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Date: 11/27/2012 4:48:00 PM
oooh, that is a chilling one, Charma. ME likes.
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Date: 11/27/2012 3:50:00 PM
wow Little Red Riding Hood, love this!!
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Date: 11/24/2012 12:55:00 PM
Why should the wolf be a bad wolf, if imagination like yours can paint him snow white, and the girl is lost in ecstatic bliss... For me, not scary at all; I want to dream a beautiful dream tonight! Thanks for inspiring, Charming Charmaine! Love, Hanitra
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Date: 11/23/2012 5:50:00 PM
Hello, Charmaine, so much to watch out for... I enjoyed the whole reflecting scenario ,, hope she moves fast.. enjoyed reading your haiku, :-) Have yourself a nice night~ PD
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Date: 11/23/2012 10:56:00 AM
This haiku makes me wonder, I can just imagine so much into this piece of yours... I hope all is well with you dear friend! Thank you for passing by my poem :) sending you and Christina hugs....
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Date: 11/22/2012 8:57:00 AM
Yeah Chilling one Charma.....thanks for visiting my poem.
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Date: 11/19/2012 9:33:00 AM
Chilling haiku, Charmaine!...Great imagination - Tim
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Date: 11/19/2012 5:14:00 AM
Good one - like your haiku Charmaine. - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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