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Haiku-Night Hunt

still waters a lost girl watches the wolf's reflection

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/25/2013 7:09:00 PM

Thanks so much for your awsome comment! After reading it, I just had to check out your haikus. This one is perfect. I can't recall reading a better! Wishing you inspiration.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2013 12:06:00 PM

The scene is painted with a few words..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Sean Goodwin

Date: 11/28/2012 12:24:00 AM

A good different one here. The reflection should be a nice one. I have a thing for wolves which makes me like the animal a lot. -- Sean

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2012 4:48:00 PM

oooh, that is a chilling one, Charma. ME likes.

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/27/2012 3:50:00 PM

wow Little Red Riding Hood, love this!!

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 11/24/2012 12:55:00 PM

Why should the wolf be a bad wolf, if imagination like yours can paint him snow white, and the girl is lost in ecstatic bliss... For me, not scary at all; I want to dream a beautiful dream tonight! Thanks for inspiring, Charming Charmaine! Love, Hanitra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2012 5:50:00 PM

Hello, Charmaine, so much to watch out for... I enjoyed the whole reflecting scenario ,, hope she moves fast.. enjoyed reading your haiku, :-) Have yourself a nice night~ PD

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/23/2012 10:56:00 AM

This haiku makes me wonder, I can just imagine so much into this piece of yours... I hope all is well with you dear friend! Thank you for passing by my poem :) sending you and Christina hugs....

Kash Poet

Date: 11/22/2012 8:57:00 AM

Yeah Chilling one Charma.....thanks for visiting my poem.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/19/2012 9:33:00 AM

Chilling haiku, Charmaine!...Great imagination - Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/19/2012 5:14:00 AM

Good one - like your haiku Charmaine. - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)