Haiku- Thunder

Haiku: Thunder dark clouds rumble on echos of flashing lights strike thunder’s wrath revealed. by Zyrool

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/30/2024 3:44:00 PM

Powerful Haiku, Zyrool. I'm back to catch up on your poetry. Bill

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/31/2024 6:53:00 AM

Hi Pal, thank you for your support. Wishing you a fabulous weekend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/28/2024 7:55:00 PM

'thunder's wrath' really nails it. Great haiku, Zyrool --- and welcome to Poetry Soup. ~ Gershon

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/31/2024 6:49:00 AM

Hi Gershon, thanks for the welcome it feels good to be among so many friendly people. Glad you like my little poem. Have an enjoyable weekend, my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/27/2024 1:39:00 PM

An active participating haiku that I love very much, thanks for sharing.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/27/2024 1:53:00 PM

Hello Rose, thank you for your kind words they mean a lot. Glad you like it.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/22/2024 9:34:00 PM

I enjoyed very much this classic haiku. It mentions the wrath of thunder which is how I experience these events.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/23/2024 5:26:00 AM

Hello Hilda, happy weekend to you my friend. Glad you like it. As a child I was scared of the sound of thunder and still is. Thank you for your feedback.