Haiku- Thunder

Haiku: Thunder dark clouds rumble on echos of flashing lights strike thunder’s wrath revealed. by Zyrool

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/13/2024 3:34:00 PM

Hello Zyrool, thunder is loud. it makes people jump when the air is to quiet. thunder is always followed by lightening. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2024 10:28:00 AM

Hello Zyrool, You are welcome. Oh! What were you hiding from as a child? Wishing you a blessed Sunday and a awesome week ahead. m y friend. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 7/14/2024 12:18:00 AM

Hi Darlene, thank you for the read. Greatly appreciated. As a child I used to run and ride under the bed. Wishing you a beautifully Blessed Sunday and an awesome week ahead, my friend.

Ricky Muse

Date: 5/9/2024 9:07:00 PM

I find it interesting how you created movement with just a few words. Well done my friend...........peace!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/9/2024 11:26:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, much appreciated my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

Bill Baker

Date: 3/30/2024 3:44:00 PM

Powerful Haiku, Zyrool. I'm back to catch up on your poetry. Bill

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/31/2024 6:53:00 AM

Hi Pal, thank you for your support. Wishing you a fabulous weekend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/28/2024 7:55:00 PM

'thunder's wrath' really nails it. Great haiku, Zyrool --- and welcome to Poetry Soup. ~ Gershon

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/31/2024 6:49:00 AM

Hi Gershon, thanks for the welcome it feels good to be among so many friendly people. Glad you like my little poem. Have an enjoyable weekend, my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/27/2024 1:39:00 PM

An active participating haiku that I love very much, thanks for sharing.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/27/2024 1:53:00 PM

Hello Rose, thank you for your kind words they mean a lot. Glad you like it.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/22/2024 9:34:00 PM

I enjoyed very much this classic haiku. It mentions the wrath of thunder which is how I experience these events.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 3/23/2024 5:26:00 AM

Hello Hilda, happy weekend to you my friend. Glad you like it. As a child I was scared of the sound of thunder and still is. Thank you for your feedback.