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Haiku- Spring

outside my window a gang of sparrows flew by- spring is on her way _________________________ March 4, 2020 Poetry/Haiku/spring Copyright Protected, ID 20-1233-171-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France

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James Inman

Date: 4/5/2020 12:32:00 PM

Lovely

Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2020 6:16:00 PM

James, thanks for the lovely, I love this one a lot too _Constance

W.A. Cholt

Date: 3/5/2020 6:05:00 PM

Wonderful image.

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2020 11:22:00 PM

WA, thanks so much for the visit and the wonderful _Constance

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/5/2020 6:57:00 AM

I see that gang flying by.. in your beautiful poem--imagery I can relate to.

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2020 7:48:00 AM

Vijay, thank you for visiting my poetry and for the beautiful _Constance

Jenish Somadas

Date: 3/5/2020 12:54:00 AM

May be they pass by to other shores of spring.. But beautiful Haiku..

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2020 7:49:00 AM

Jenish, thanks for visiting my poem and for the beautiful _Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 3/4/2020 9:10:00 PM

A gang of sparrows is correct. I keep seeing the herds of black birds, Like on the Birds by screen writer Daphne du Maurier. Love the imagery, Dear Heart.

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2020 7:50:00 AM

Eve, thanks for the visit, yes I am seeing gangs of birds, instead of a bird here and there and that can only mean SPRING _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2020 8:06:00 PM

lovely image Constance spring is definitely here there are new born lambs in the fields already!:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2020 7:51:00 AM

Jan, thank you for the lovely and the baby lambs must be so adorable _Constance