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names engraved in stone in moss draped tombs deep and dark sad I lay a rose _____________________________ May 1, 2016 Poetry/Haiku/my family Copyright Protected, ID, 16-7844-90-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. For the contest, Haiku on "my family" sponsor, Marvin Celestial First Place

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Charlie Smith

Date: 5/23/2016 11:33:00 AM

Wonderful win Broken Wings, congratulations...

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2016 10:48:00 AM

brought a huge lump to my throat - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Bonnie Jennings

Date: 5/19/2016 9:59:00 PM

Congrats on tour win... Your haiku is great!

Constance La France
Date: 5/20/2016 11:00:00 AM

Bonnie thanks so much for the compliment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2016 8:08:00 PM

Big Congrats to you, Constance!!

Constance La France
Date: 5/20/2016 10:59:00 AM

Andrea thanks so much

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/19/2016 10:06:00 AM

Oh Constance, I see why this was chosen for first place. Congratulations on this heartfelt piece taking top honors! #7 ; )

Constance La France
Date: 5/19/2016 4:18:00 PM

Connie thanks for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/19/2016 8:06:00 AM

So sad, but so comprehensive in imagery about your dear family, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 5/19/2016 4:19:00 PM

Sandra thanks for the congratulations and the nice comment

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 5/19/2016 6:59:00 AM

Hi! email me your full name, birthday and the snap shot of your signature for your price.

Constance La France
Date: 5/19/2016 4:20:00 PM

Marvin, will do asap

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 5/19/2016 6:52:00 AM

Congratz to you broken wings! You blew my mind!

Jack Horne

Date: 5/10/2016 3:30:00 PM

such a sad but beautiful write

Balveen Cheema

Date: 5/6/2016 10:05:00 AM

Though beautiful, yet sad!

James Inman

Date: 5/3/2016 12:02:00 PM

Beautiful BW.

Constance La France
Date: 5/3/2016 11:22:00 PM

James, thanks for the beautiful ~

Edlynn Nau

Date: 5/2/2016 2:29:00 PM

Excellent! At first I laughed. You must forgive me, as a fan of Dr Who, I saw the picture first. That angle covering her eyes would mean that the family conquered the angle (they are frightening demons in Who). Then I read the sad words and came back to the real world. We all hate that our beginning and ending is just the same no matter what we did here. Good one.

Constance La France
Date: 5/2/2016 5:56:00 PM

Edlynn, thanks for visiting and the comment , appreciate

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/1/2016 4:40:00 PM

Wonderful one, Constance. You have inspired John with your haiku and picture too. WE have back in my home town a place where an angel weeps over a child's tomb. All we kids loved to go to the very back of the cemetery to visit the mausoleum of the "blue angel" I would go there again if I could to see it.

Constance La France
Date: 5/2/2016 5:58:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the wonderful and oh that angel on the childs tomb must be breathtaking

John Lawless

Date: 5/1/2016 3:41:00 PM

deeply sad BW.

Constance La France
Date: 5/2/2016 5:59:00 PM

John thank you for visiting