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Haiku- My Family

names engraved in stone
in moss draped tombs deep and dark
 
                 sad    I lay a rose


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May 1, 2016


Poetry/Haiku/my family
Copyright Protected, ID, 16-7844-90-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.


For the contest, Haiku on "my family"
sponsor, Marvin Celestial

First  Place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2016

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Charlie Smith Date: 5/23/2016 11:33:00 AM Wonderful win Broken Wings, congratulations... Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/20/2016 10:48:00 AM brought a huge lump to my throat - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Bonnie Jennings Date: 5/19/2016 9:59:00 PM Congrats on tour win... Your haiku is great! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/20/2016 11:00:00 AM Bonnie thanks so much for the compliment

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/19/2016 8:08:00 PM Big Congrats to you, Constance!! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/20/2016 10:59:00 AM Andrea thanks so much

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/19/2016 10:06:00 AM Oh Constance, I see why this was chosen for first place. Congratulations on this heartfelt piece taking top honors! #7 ; ) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/19/2016 4:18:00 PM Connie thanks for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate

Sandra Haight Date: 5/19/2016 8:06:00 AM So sad, but so comprehensive in imagery about your dear family, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/19/2016 4:19:00 PM Sandra thanks for the congratulations and the nice comment

Marvin G. Celestial Date: 5/19/2016 6:59:00 AM Hi! email me your full name, birthday and the snap shot of your signature for your price. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/19/2016 4:20:00 PM Marvin, will do asap

Marvin G. Celestial Date: 5/19/2016 6:52:00 AM Congratz to you broken wings! You blew my mind! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 5/10/2016 3:30:00 PM such a sad but beautiful write Login to Reply

Balveen Cheema Date: 5/6/2016 10:05:00 AM Though beautiful, yet sad! Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 5/3/2016 12:02:00 PM Beautiful BW. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/3/2016 11:22:00 PM James, thanks for the beautiful ~

Edlynn Nau Date: 5/2/2016 2:29:00 PM Excellent! At first I laughed. You must forgive me, as a fan of Dr Who, I saw the picture first. That angle covering her eyes would mean that the family conquered the angle (they are frightening demons in Who). Then I read the sad words and came back to the real world. We all hate that our beginning and ending is just the same no matter what we did here. Good one. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/2/2016 5:56:00 PM Edlynn, thanks for visiting and the comment , appreciate

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/1/2016 4:40:00 PM Wonderful one, Constance. You have inspired John with your haiku and picture too. WE have back in my home town a place where an angel weeps over a child's tomb. All we kids loved to go to the very back of the cemetery to visit the mausoleum of the "blue angel" I would go there again if I could to see it. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/2/2016 5:58:00 PM Andrea, thanks for the wonderful and oh that angel on the childs tomb must be breathtaking

John Lawless Date: 5/1/2016 3:41:00 PM deeply sad BW. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/2/2016 5:59:00 PM John thank you for visiting

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/1/2016 3:24:00 PM - R.I.P. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/2/2016 5:59:00 PM Sunshine, thanks for reading my poem

Tim Smith Date: 5/1/2016 3:17:00 PM Very heart touching poem Constance. Be blessed. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/2/2016 6:00:00 PM Tim, thanks for visiting