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in a deep forest hummingbirds find a flower- silent fluttering _____________________ March 31, 2016 Poetry/Haiku/hummingbirds Copyright Protected, ID 16-773- 544-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. For the contest, Any Poem sponsor, PD Sixth Place ____________________ Poem of the Day- April 2, 2016

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Date: 6/3/2016 5:06:00 AM
Hi Broken Wing. What a nice Haiku. I just saw a hummingbird drink water midair that was dripping off the roof. Amazing birds. Thank you for painting such a nice word picture. JP
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Date: 4/4/2016 10:24:00 PM
Hummingbirds are wonderful creatures. A definite 7 rating
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Date: 4/5/2016 3:05:00 AM
Angel, thanks for visiting with the wonderful and the 7 !!
Date: 4/3/2016 7:43:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. B.W. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/3/2016 1:42:00 PM
Anne Lise, thanks so much for the congrats and hugs ~
Date: 4/3/2016 1:55:00 AM
Congrats for being the poem of the day! :)
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Date: 4/3/2016 1:46:00 PM
Moon, thanks so much for the congrats ~
Date: 4/2/2016 10:43:00 PM
Hi Constance, dropping by with my congratulations on Poem Of The Day. Well deserved with this wonderful Haiku. Hugs....Vlad.
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Date: 4/3/2016 12:21:00 AM
Vlad, thanks for the congratulations, the wonderful and hugs ~
Date: 4/2/2016 9:41:00 PM
Congrats on POTD
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Date: 4/3/2016 12:22:00 AM
Cindi, thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 4/2/2016 7:10:00 PM
If a tree falls in a forest and no one is there does it make a sound?..I like your line of thought on this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/3/2016 12:23:00 AM
Sara, thanks for visiting, appreciate ~
Date: 4/2/2016 7:02:00 PM
Very lovely haiku Constance... Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 4/3/2016 12:23:00 AM
Tim, thanks for the lovely and the congratulations !!
Date: 4/2/2016 1:39:00 PM
Congrats on a beautiful POD
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Date: 4/2/2016 5:16:00 PM
Brain thanks for visiting with the congrats and beautiful ~
Date: 4/2/2016 1:05:00 PM
Wow!!! a perfect haiku, BW, congratulations on Poem Of The Day!!!!!!
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Date: 4/2/2016 1:09:00 PM
Eve, thanks for the wow and the congrats !
Date: 4/2/2016 9:05:00 AM
Big congratulations on your placement in the contest and POTD, Constance!!! Humming all the way:) It's a victory for perseverance!! ~ Warm regards ~ paul
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Date: 4/2/2016 11:54:00 AM
Paul, thank you so much for the congratulations on the comment, so appreciated !!
Date: 4/2/2016 8:39:00 AM
Beautiful Broken Wings... Verlena
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Date: 4/2/2016 11:55:00 AM
Verlena, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !!!
Date: 4/2/2016 7:54:00 AM
Congrats on POTD B/W, good job...
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Date: 4/2/2016 11:55:00 AM
Charlie, thanks for the congrats
Date: 4/2/2016 7:18:00 AM
Beautiful , I love hummingbirds :) Grats on peom of the day
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Date: 4/2/2016 11:56:00 AM
Casarah, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and congrats !
Date: 4/2/2016 6:30:00 AM
Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/2/2016 11:57:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the congrats and hugs !
Date: 4/1/2016 8:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win !
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Date: 4/1/2016 8:43:00 PM
Lenny, thanks for visiting with congrats !
Date: 4/1/2016 1:27:00 PM
This hummingbird is you Constance.
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Date: 4/1/2016 7:46:00 PM
Rajat, then that would make me beautiful, thank you for the compliment !
Date: 4/1/2016 9:32:00 AM
Hi Constance, a beautiful Haiku. Your words paint the vision. This Haiku goes into my faves. This has to be a seven. An excellent write....Mike.
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Date: 4/1/2016 7:51:00 PM
Mike, thanks for the beautiful and the excellent, I love those words and for the fav and 7 ~
Date: 4/1/2016 2:57:00 AM
many congrats on your win Broken Wings:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/1/2016 7:59:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting with the congrats and hugs !
Date: 4/1/2016 1:29:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Broken..
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Date: 4/1/2016 8:07:00 PM
Upma, thanks for the congrats and superb and lovely, just love those words !
Date: 4/1/2016 12:40:00 AM
Hey, how neat. One of your hummingbird haiku placed with a nice win on PD's list. congrats, Constance
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Date: 4/1/2016 8:08:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats, finally my hummingbird got a placement !!!!!
Date: 3/31/2016 11:58:00 PM
Broken Wings, Congratulations on your Awesome Any Poem #38 win. Stop by my blog "GONE," drop by and leave a smile if you'd like. :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/1/2016 8:09:00 PM
Linda, thank you for a great contest and for my great placement, so honored to be on your list ~!
Date: 3/31/2016 12:33:00 PM
Yes. Isn't it interesting how they whir those wings without making any noise, and such a tiny bird. Love, daver
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Date: 3/31/2016 3:28:00 PM
Dave thanks for visiting my poem today with the love. ..
Date: 3/31/2016 11:25:00 AM
wonderful imagery BW good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/31/2016 3:29:00 PM
Jan thanks for visiting my poem with the wonderful and hugs ...
Date: 3/31/2016 10:33:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku Constance!
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Date: 3/31/2016 3:27:00 PM
Charmaine thanks for visiting my poem with the beautiful. ...

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