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Haiku- Hot Bloom

liquid lava red vivid blooms in hot tropics fiery colour splash

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L. J. Carber

Date: 1/27/2021 7:41:00 AM

a true haiku! Many attempt the form but few achieve it--great 1st line--and the 3rd line indicates you're British [i.e., 'color' spelled with an 'u']?

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/6/2019 1:20:00 PM

Hello Aqua Marine, I sense that you describe a flower. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/7/2019 12:47:00 PM

Hello Aqua Marine, the flower the way youdescribe it is beautiful. Where do you live?I will visit again. Hav a nice day my friend.

Aqua Marine
Date: 12/6/2019 3:37:00 PM

You are right, Darlene! Flowers that grow in tropical countries are often big and brightly coloured - I imagine that they are like the colours of the lava flowing from volcanoes - bright red and orange! (just my imagination - I dont live in a tropical land, but we do have beautiful flowers here too...) Warmest regards. ~~Aqua M~~ Thank you for your visit and comment!

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/8/2019 10:08:00 PM

Lovely exotic sensation to your poem, AM.

Aqua Marine
Date: 5/12/2019 2:10:00 PM

Life is filled with amazing sights...They creep into our imagination, and fill our thoughts with colourful words....Thank you for your thoughtful comments on my haiku! : )

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/18/2018 5:26:00 PM

Hi Aqua Marine, this captivates like an exotic flower, gorgeous!

Aqua Marine
Date: 8/29/2018 4:05:00 PM

I am grateful for your comment, Michelle- thank you for your visit!