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Haiku- Going Bananas

banana bread finger -licking fruit glaze 4/4/2 Contemporary Haiku -- ---------- fresh cinnamon crumbs on the path where we once shared his banana bread Traditinonal Haiku 5/7/5

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/14/2017 3:24:00 PM

I've never had banana bread, but had banana sandwich instead! I'll go for the first haiku, Charm. Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2017 9:32:00 AM

a maltese delicacy?.. no matter, both styles of 'ku are definitely absorbing and savory, dear charms.. huggs

Paloma P

Date: 1/4/2017 8:18:00 AM

His banana bread made me smirk, sorry it's been one of those weeks. :) I'm not a big banana fan but you could convert me. :)

Darren White

Date: 1/4/2017 12:26:00 AM

I think I prefer the first :) But they are both tasty!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2017 7:07:00 PM

VERY cool.The modern one is the better one!!

Chris Green

Date: 1/3/2017 5:19:00 PM

Each of these is sweet in it's own delicious way. I am very fond of banana bread but now perhaps even more so. I like the comparisons here as each stands on its own, but all are related to a delicious poetic theme. You sure did bake the perfect dessert with your words in this one Charmaine. Now some coffee would be nice too. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/3/2017 4:37:00 PM

I love banana break but stopped baking it when son went to uni and now hubby is diabetic I rarely bake at all except for his sugar free flapjacks:-( hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 1/3/2017 4:29:00 PM

Very nice...I am still tasting the cinnamon from the Snicker doodles my daughter made on New Years Eve...hope you are sharing the banana bread

Jan Allison
Date: 1/3/2017 4:36:00 PM

oh wow snicker doodles they are delicious - our American friend Mary used to bake them for us before she had a stroke and had to give up her baking business - you brought back great memories:-) hugs jan xxx