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Haiku- Autumn

blood red and yellow
     stained glass  f a l l  trees are changing-
          maple spreads her cloak

               streams are slowing down
     burnt orange  l e a v e s  are floating-
                      ducks swim in still pools

                                  and sadly birds sing
                          their silk  f e a t h e r s  fluttering-
                wind picks up a leaf

the squirrels busy
              scampering up  g o l d e n  trees-
                                               sky is azure blue

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September 19, 2016


Poetry/Haiku/autumn
Copyright Protected, ID 16-8310-99-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym


For the contest, Autumn Haiku
sponsor, Laura Loo

First Place

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Kim Merryman Date: 9/22/2016 3:48:00 PM Vivid, colorful imagery in your haiku, Constance! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings! Login to Reply

Moon Flower Date: 9/21/2016 2:02:00 PM Great one, BW. Congrats! Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 9/21/2016 10:54:00 AM Lovely BW, congratulations on your win... Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/21/2016 2:18:00 AM Congratulationsulation's on your awesome win! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/20/2016 8:54:00 PM Beautiful, Broken Wings! Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 9/20/2016 7:52:00 PM Dropping back with big congrats. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/20/2016 6:21:00 PM I love this imagery, Constance, Amazing that last line!!! Big congrats. Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 9/20/2016 5:49:00 PM Such lovely imagery of Autumn in your well-chosen words, Broken Wings, and your word placement scheme lends to the poetic dance! Congratulations on your First Place win! 7, Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/20/2016 4:16:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Constance :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 9/20/2016 3:53:00 PM Broken Wings- I have always loved when I read more than 1 haiku and this did it for me. Beautiful imagery and the layout is a perfect touch...congratulations on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Login to Reply

Abosede Ogundare Date: 9/20/2016 8:55:00 AM Good luck with the contest, this is very lovely... Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 9/19/2016 2:43:00 PM Beautiful set of Haiku. Good luck on the contest. Agnes Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/19/2016 2:21:00 PM lovely string of haiku good luck Constance:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply