Haiku-1


roaring orange tongues 
flicker around crackling trees
low water table

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2012 12:34:00 AM

Diana, you should enter this one in PD's contest: nature the destroyer!! go to her contest page and use that title!

Diana Rosser
Date: 3/11/2012 3:21:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading so many of my writes and for your wonderful positive feedback, I am really touched. Thanks again.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 11:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Diana. Love, Carol

Diana Rosser
Date: 2/22/2012 9:28:00 AM

Thanks for this, I actually didn't know that it was.

Shirley Long

Date: 2/21/2012 8:53:00 AM

Great poem Dianna, I enjoyed reading it.

Daver Austin

Date: 2/20/2012 8:36:00 AM

Kinda dry, huh? Congrats on the selection. daver

Diana Rosser
Date: 2/22/2012 9:27:00 AM

Kinda witty! Thanks for the response.

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/20/2012 12:03:00 AM

Diana, Even though I am not a fan of numbering my Haiku's, I respect your decision. I know this is technically correct and Haiku's aren't supposed to be titled, I am a rebel and I title my Haiku's. As far as your poem goes, wonderful job on the form and substance. This is a good Haiku. I enjoyed it and thanks for sharing it. Congrats on having your work featured by Poetry Soup this week..........S.Ronthorpe

Joann Grisetti
Date: 4/9/2012 5:31:00 PM

I agree with numbering. I number all of mine as well.

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