Gypsy Rose

Every circus needs to have a side show.
In the olden days you’d often see
unique and wondrous sights; you should know
you are reading of one now. It’s me!

I read palms and Tarot cards till night,
but then I loosen up and start to dance.
Though I surely suffer from no stage fright,
I don’t have to strip tease to entrance!

I simply shimmy in my sexy clothes
while swirling round; I sweetly sing and do
amazing magic, for this Gypsy Rose
has many ways of entertaining you.

A crowd of people I can hypnotize
and since I am so skilled, be wary lest
you look too deeply into my green eyes,
for reading souls is what I do the best!

For David Williams' Circus Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 12:46 AM
I love this one,,, remember the song Gypsy Woman by Brian Hyland 1970. We were 15. Always loved Cher looking gypsy too. Hey thanks for going back to Emie's poem. She was around 30 years old in May 2012 She had a bad heart. I never ask anything else !
Hollingsworth Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 6:37 PM
sounds like a trip...
Poet Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 9:34 PM
Hola!Que estas haciendo?
Gonzales Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 8:44 PM
very nice poem... looking forward to seeing more
Salama  Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 9:47 AM
The enchantress and the fortune teller - what could be better! Congratulations on your win Andrea! :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 9:20 AM
did you predict a win. ms. fortune teller??.. swinging cheers to you, andie!..:) congrats and huggs!
May Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 8:12 AM
congrats on your win Andrea
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Circus" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
O'Leary Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 4:36 AM
Nice poem... and congrats... Terry
Williams Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:51 AM
Andrea congrats on your win, I love te idea of you shimmying with the Tarot cards, you would certainly hypnotise..David
Babcock Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 9:42 PM
Will try and read more later but am tired tonight-down with the flu-in fact everyone is down with the flu this week except hubby. A bummer of a week. love phyl
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 12:56 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Andrea. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 7:31 PM
Cute poem, Andrea....if you added a word about theives and tramps...you could enter this in the other contest!! I am struggling finding muse for both challenges!!
Horne Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 4:19 PM
love this wonderfully imaginative piece, andrea - especially love the last stanza
Maverick Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 12:33 AM
A lively imaginative write Andrea,, hope you score high in the contest with this...Joe
Wesley Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 11:24 AM
It's a cabaret you need, not a circus Andrea. That mesmerizing dance would surly hypnotize the crowd. Loved this peom and bet you wow David in the contest. Luv, Elizabeth
Johnson Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 3:25 PM
Merry Christmas. :)
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 1:57 PM
You paint it in this poem Andrea. - oxox Anne-Lise
May Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 1:36 PM
I remember that song some years ago by tony orlando..sweet gypsy Rose..I enjoyed your poem..good luck in the contest..love.. Joseph
Kearley Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Ho ho!... You put the pictures in my mind with this one!...Ha,ha.. Very nice! :o) Shimmy-ing in the sexy clothes...Ha,ha
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 11:45 PM
Always fun to read your poetry dear Andrea. It could happen! I can see you as Gypsy Rose. This should do great in the contest.
M V Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 10:40 PM
This is a lovely piece,Andrea
Macmillan Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 5:26 PM
Hey just read your comment on Lizzy's poem -- I'll go back and comment to her later tonight--- lol at church? But then, there IS a spiritual quality to her writes so I don't think "HE" would mind one little bit. Isn't it a lovely book?
Macmillan Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 4:49 PM
Loved the sultry feel, Andrea. Have you read Hunchback of Notre Dame. Your poem reminded me of... oh... d'oh... was it Esmerelda, I think? Mystical, elusive, part real/part illusion. Enjoyed the last line the most, and I do so love it when a poem ends on a strong note! This should place well, chum. Oh what a week...I'm TOAST.
Anish Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 4:09 PM
I know a couple of belly dancers and it is sexier than seeing a stripper(which I must confess I have done). My Chinese student told me they eat dogs and donkeys in China. I cringed a bit. I was seeing a Chinese woman for 4 years - we are parted now - and I learned that Chinese restaurants often have one type of food for the general public and another menu for the Chinese population. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 8:11 PM
probably the general public is getting the donkey too and they don't know it. hahaha
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