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Guy Advice In a Fools Paradise Collaboration

In regards, to the birds and the bees Depends on who’s watching, what he sees There are some women, impossible to please Wise men are wary, to be with one of these See beneath all that glitter, her cool choreographed style Sexy and sultry, wrapped in a sweet smile She’s most likely, to leave in a short while The pain of the distance, will increase mile by mile But societal ties and moral cues Would have asked, that you pay her dues You confessed your love, now you play the blues The right woman, is rarely the one that you choose She left you alone, without saying a word The rumors were real, the ones that you heard Far from innocent, her morals were blurred Yet not following her path, never occurred They say Love is perennially blind, so let it be Keep your eyes open, see what you need to see Love shouldn’t destroy you, choose to be free I beg of you young lad, please listen to me Sometimes it’s hard, to let go of some things When the time’s right, love brings what it brings The one you desire, might break your heart strings From a true love, many a blessing springs It’s her face, because of it many hearts have slipped You make such a mistake your wings are clipped Heartbroken, insides soul feels whipped For this kind of love, a man is not equipped When you and your lady are all alone Ensure to her, your love is known Forget past desire, the bird who has flown Unburden your sins, it’s time to atone In your arms gentle and kind she may feel What’s inside to be feared is also real The one you had, holds a certain appeal So you remain unsatisfied, after love’s meal I have here an old solution For this conflict resolution Within your soul she is pollution Leading you to a wrong conclusion A woman fair, who says yes dear She wants a man, whose values are clear You will know the truth, when you look in the mirror It’s your baser emotions, that you must fear. Compilation poem Orchestrated by: Richard Lamoureux Contributors: John Lawless, Sushmita Kalashikar, Lei Strauss, Subimal Sinha-Roy, Christian Adeyemi, Faraz Ajmal, Jerry Hackett, Andreas Simic and Geoffrey Brewer. The order of the stanzas match the contributors 1,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10. My stanza was 2. Note: I made changes to allow for flow and rhyme pattern. Thanks to Brenda Chiri for sponsoring her "Guy Advice" contest. To view original artists work please look at contest results. A personal favorite for me is "Yes Dear" by Geoffrey Brewer. I hope I did justice with this piece.

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Date: 10/24/2018 5:12:00 PM
Hi Richard, an excellent Collaboration. I loved each and every stanza. This is a wonderful work. A Fave. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 1/21/2018 7:33:00 AM
You have such a rich vocabulary,You and an ease with words well, that's why you are the pro and my the student  Great way to start my day,  I have been thinking im not going to send you emails I will post my poems and if you like you can read them at your discretion, It was not right me sending you that one yet.  Once again, sorry
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2018 9:00:00 AM
No reason to be sorry, I am always happy to get a soup mail. Thanks for the visit and comment. :0)
Date: 1/20/2018 3:15:00 PM
WoW! Richard, You and all the contributors have penned some good "sound" advice. I agree with Jan, this is good advice for the young and old and both sexes as well. You all did an excellent job:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2018 4:13:00 PM
Thanks again Alexis.
Date: 1/19/2018 3:06:00 PM
bam,I liked it because you have reassured me that im doing something right,  Tell a story and it rhymes I'm beginning  to see that not all know how to do this Or it calls another kind of poetry,  I keep calling mine prose and maybe it is not, your poem has a gentleness to it, but don't listen to me   im an amateur that is winging it I wrote about 130 poems and I thought I was ready to publish LOL https://plus.google.com/+marcacrich
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/19/2018 5:02:00 PM
Hi Marc, thanks for this great comment. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Do look around, I might have others that appeal to your taste. I am off to read some of your words.
Date: 1/18/2018 12:42:00 AM
My goodness, you really got yourself and others involved in this one, Richard. You are so great with community building! I really enjoyed reading all these stanzas . Nothing compares to enjoying the experience if the poem is long!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/18/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. :0)
Date: 1/16/2018 4:21:00 PM
Sage advice and from so many different authors at that. Quite a task you undertook. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/17/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Eileen. Hugs Rick.
Date: 1/16/2018 9:21:00 AM
Brilliant piece of work Richard, well done. Regards Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Tom, I had lots of inspiration and words to glean from.
Date: 1/16/2018 8:47:00 AM
When the heart falls in love reason, somehow, becomes deaf to any advice given my friend, Richard! Haha! A marvelous sensible poem in harmony with the demands of the contest! Enjoyed it my friend, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2018 8:55:00 AM
The heart wants what the heart wants. Thanks for the visit Demetrios.
Date: 1/16/2018 7:08:00 AM
Awesome Richard, wow the experience is earth shattering..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Harry, much appreciated.
Date: 1/16/2018 6:51:00 AM
Woah what an excellent poem, so much better with all those people contributing.. excellent stuff..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2018 7:54:00 AM
I agree Silent.
Date: 1/16/2018 6:41:00 AM
A great idea Richard...useful and clever advice resonates in every line..kudos to all collaborators.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 1/16/2018 6:28:00 AM
absolutely fabulous collaboration Richard i enjoyed every single stanza! Many fabulous lines and some hard punching hitting facts about women and some very wise advice indeed!:-a poem all young men and women should read -both sexes could learn from this poem!! hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thanks for being the first to moment Jan. Hugs Rick.

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