Guts and Glory

A black man plucks
a machine gun’s ratatat and a Huey’s blade thwop
“Oh say can you seeeeeeeeeeee….” echoes 
A cursing, sacrilegious rendition…….
“by the dawns early light …………The crowds writhe.
“bombs bursting in air………….
a napalm scream 
into the reality of Jimi’s throng.
“o’er the land of the free………”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 3:05 PM
Ok Deb., I want to read the full version. What date did you post it? You have a LOT of poems! (Or send me the link. Do you think I'm lazy? LOL) Smiles, XOXOX Dane
Guzzi Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 4:57 AM
This is a "crop" as they say in art of a longer write called Jimi's Napalm Scream...please read the full version...light & Love friends
Crisci Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 12:05 AM
Congratulations on your win, Deborah. All that you wrote sounds so true and real. He could have lived longer, if he had lived differently...not so wildly and carelessly. Great write from your poetical pen! Awesome and brazen! Have a magnificent day and smile. Love and admiration, Andrew.
Fraser Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 12:50 PM
Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest Deborah >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 7:06 AM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Jimi contest with this great synopsis of his life and times... luv that title too TEACH...enjoy your win today..luv.. Linda-Marie (pupil)
Moreno Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 9:32 PM
DG, congratulations on your success in my Jimi Hendrix Contest...Raul
Loving Iii Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 9:16 AM
a memory. john
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