Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Sedoka

Notes About The Poem

- Gusto -

Distant as a dream,

                                      miracles seeking gusto

                                     Wild triumph and victory

                                    Clouds with cotton wings

                                  The joy of your own heartbeat

                                ... new life will sprout on the path








19.03.2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Pick-A-Title, Vol 15 - Sedoka - 
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
3rd place in the contest

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Edward Ibeh April 18, 2020 at 5:35 PM What a lovely, celestial sedoka, Anne-Lise:-) Congratulations on your winning my contest. Love that photo of cloud with cotton wings! Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2020 at 1:08 PM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy April 13, 2020 at 1:11 PM A big CONGRATS on your win, Anne-Lise! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2020 at 1:44 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Janice ... much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas April 13, 2020 at 12:46 AM Clouds with cotton wings.. Great imagery and a positive vibe in those lines.. Congrats Anne.. Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2020 at 1:44 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulations, Jenish ... much appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos March 26, 2020 at 11:33 AM Miracles seeking gusto - just what we need at present - your imagination soars with this poem my friend. I'm sorry you can't move into your newhome - is Norway also in a lock down? Blessings and hugs and safe thoughts coming to you dear soul sister. Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2020 at 12:34 PM - Norway has been in a lockdown for two weeks now ...we finally got the kitchen across the border from Denmark this week ... but the carpenters are in Lithuania and are not allowed to enter Norway ... we really need a miracle, my friend Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2020 at 6:20 PM Dreams deferred always seem distant and yet we hope... Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2020 at 9:36 AM - Kim, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One March 22, 2020 at 7:54 AM Now that is a great sedoka.. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2020 at 9:35 AM - Many thanks S.O., for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven March 21, 2020 at 11:53 AM Hi Anne-Lise, this is such a beautiful Sedoka, The lightness of each line does touch the heart. Your wonderful words paint such a special canvas within the mind. This poetic gem does give the heart peace. I hope you are well. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2020 at 9:35 AM - Mike, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner March 20, 2020 at 3:06 PM Great line 'cloud with cotton wings' - good luck in the contest- Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2020 at 3:49 PM - Thank you very much, Michelle ... take care :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer March 20, 2020 at 12:52 PM i love the optimism displayed in this poem, anne-lise! it's what we all need now... Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2020 at 3:48 PM - Many thanks for lovely comments, dear Ilene :) - Have a nice and safe weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams March 19, 2020 at 10:08 PM your words fall gently down the page... love the photo... it goes well with your words.... hugs and blessings my friend! Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2020 at 3:45 PM - Thank you very much, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham March 19, 2020 at 6:29 PM Nicely done Anne hope alls well. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2020 at 3:45 PM - Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios March 19, 2020 at 5:36 PM Hi Anne Lise! Gee, poetess! Breathtaking Sedoku. Panagiota Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2020 at 3:41 PM - Many thanks for your lovely comments, Panagiota :) - Have a great and safe weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 19, 2020 at 3:32 PM So ethereal and optimistic dearest, Anne-Lise! Beautifully done! God bless you! Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2020 at 3:40 PM - Many thanks for lovely comments, Demetrios :) - Have a nice and safe weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)