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Gunpowder

The frozen flowers are being painted by an unknown painter. The butterflies are looking for gunpowder in the winter to burn themselves, to burn these beautiful frozen flowers. A Chaotic Circle with the power, with the guns and gunpowder; It confines everything except stars. I want to brake these bars! Without love our only chance is a miracle. Can we save the butterflies from this vicious circle? Can we change the smell of gunpowder? Can we change the world?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/15/2012 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on our poetry being featured this week Zeljko. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:33:00 PM
"Without love our only chance is a miracle" Well said. And congratulations on being featured this week, and for an excellent piece. - Chuck
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Date: 4/13/2012 5:01:00 PM
I wish i could change the world... but cannot... but i keep on trying.. Maybe if everybody gave that bit of energy.. maybe then we could make those bits a whole..Great wise message.
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:29:00 PM
Very intense and powerful statements. Welcome to the Soup!
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:38:00 AM
can we? yes if it's a 'we'. wonderful poem Željko and welcome to the soup
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:58:00 PM
This is such an awesome poem! I read it twice!! Always, Laura
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Date: 3/14/2012 10:21:00 AM
Z.S., i like.the image you have here... frozen flower...let's save the butterflies.. paint pictures without that smell... but, no the more we try to change the.world... the more we pull away from that miracle, and fall into that vicious circle call.. survival of the fittest..great poem..pd
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Željko Sitar
Date: 3/14/2012 10:27:00 AM
This is my first poem on english language! I have a lot on my native-croatian lang. (about 100) and I am so glad that you like this poem.
Date: 3/13/2012 4:39:00 PM
welcome to soup poetry . Nice poem looking foward to reading more .
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Željko Sitar
Date: 3/13/2012 4:43:00 PM
Thanx for reading and for welcome!!! :))
Date: 3/13/2012 4:02:00 PM
Welcome into P-Soup - hope you will write and share alot of poems here.Wery well written this poem, thank you. - oxox love form Norway and Anne-Lise
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Željko Sitar
Date: 3/13/2012 4:12:00 PM
Thank you for welcome and beautiful words and I did not expected any comments on that poem so quickly. Love from Croatia and Željko!!!
Date: 3/13/2012 3:56:00 PM
That appears to be a question without an answer. I have written lots of poetry taken from the Balkan situation, it seems the world cares not one tad more than it cares for East Central Africa. We must work harder.
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Željko Sitar
Date: 3/13/2012 4:05:00 PM
Thank you for comment I am glad that someone is reading this.

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