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Gun

A gun is a deadly weapon
                                           It can kill people with wasted reason

                                                     Authorized to have this
                                                 Only the army and the police

                                               Don’t use it to point to a person
                                           You will landed straight to the prison

                                      A gun is an instrument for an unending war
                                          Civilians traumatized for a painful scar

                            So please have some conscience not to use it barbarically
                                      Coz it will cause our life and so don’t be a folly 



                                                          January 29, 2013
                                               For Gwendolen "Gun" contest
                                                        1ST PLACE WINNER

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Joseph May Date: 2/26/2013 6:23:00 PM congrats on your win Maria Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/26/2013 4:50:00 PM So true, maria. Congrats on the winners list. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/26/2013 10:40:00 AM Many congratulations on your number 1 Maria luv xx Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 2/25/2013 11:09:00 PM Many congrats Maria for this well deserved win Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/25/2013 9:09:00 PM Maria, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 1/31/2013 11:22:00 AM Maria great lines, good luck and I love your avatar...David Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/31/2013 5:33:00 AM Weapons should never have been invented - The worst thing I see Maria, is when small children get "toy" guns! - A good poem for the contest, good luck - hope you win. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/30/2013 6:38:00 PM So nice to read your verse this evening. Light & Love Login to Reply

Vicky Tsiluma Date: 1/29/2013 10:46:00 PM Hi Maria, I must say - excellent write! You've tackled the theme of gun usage very well. Well done. I’m certainly looking forward to read more of your work. Vicky Login to Reply

Margherita Russo Date: 1/29/2013 3:11:00 PM Excellent work poet. I love this poem. Can you look at my poem Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/29/2013 10:19:00 AM i fear the mind set behind the gun, Maria,, but your point is taken,, in this a wonderful poem... Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 1/29/2013 10:14:00 AM It is so sad that humanity has not learned to love instead of hating. A thoughtfuyl poem. Thank you for your comment on my Teddy Bear poem. Love, Joyce Login to Reply