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Written: 18 October 2023

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I’m just a little goby and I swim above the sand I’m glad to live beneath the waves and not upon the land I hear there’s cats and birds up there that love to dine on fish So as a little goby I’m right here where I would wish My fins kick up a little sand as I go on my way I’m looking for a tasty meal which I do every day Perhaps I’m quite a hypocrite as I seek out a morsel For like a cat, a shrimp would send a shiver down my dorsal And there it is, my lunch today is flitting to and fro It’s almost mesmerising so I guess I’ll have a go I swim up very stealthily and open my mouth wide The sand erupts… and it’s an anglerfish I’m stuck inside! And so I sit here hoping that another fish might follow And I can swim out as he finds a bigger fish to swallow I cannot bare to think I might be chewed up to a pulp And I can only hope the last sound I hear isn’t, “Gulp!”

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Date: 10/19/2023 3:11:00 PM
this is so cute what a wonderful rhyme:-) hugs jan xx
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/19/2023 4:10:00 PM
I really thought, somebody would contact the RSPCG (G being gobies), but everyone’s quite happy with the little goby being munched. We sure are a weird bunch. Thanks for your fly by, Jan.
Date: 10/19/2023 8:12:00 AM
Another beauty Terry….funny and really cute! Debx
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Date: 10/24/2023 3:31:00 PM
Hmmm… I must write about cute little creatures being eaten alive more often. ;-)
Date: 10/18/2023 8:10:00 PM
So cute. Poor little goby such a morsel for larger fish. Enjoyed your story. God bless you
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Date: 10/19/2023 4:17:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. I’m glad somebody here felt empathy for my little goby. All these other heathens thought a munched goby was cute; curse them all! ;-)
Date: 10/18/2023 6:09:00 PM
I once had a little Goby. Not too bright because he jumped out of his tank twice. First time I saw it and put him back in. Second time… he was home alone. Your Goby tale reminded me of Jonah getting swallowed. Always entertaining to read you, Terry.
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Date: 10/19/2023 4:23:00 PM
Thank you, Lin. I once had a very large saltwater aquarium with a pufferfish I called Biggles…. Because he thought he could fly. Like your poor little goby he was lucky a time or two and then went undiscovered til it was too late.
Date: 10/18/2023 4:34:00 PM
i wish you could see the ear-to-ear grin on my face, terry! this is adorable and just plain wonderful!!
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Date: 10/18/2023 5:09:00 PM
You are just plain wicked, Ilene. I too hope he escapes… but we shall never know… or shall we?

Book: Shattered Sighs