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Gulf Stream Beckons

Spending three full days and two nights at sea Is surely the best vacation for me Conch chowder dinner the night before At dawn adieu to the Key West shore Round-trip journey to Dry Tortugas Swordfish are known to put up a fuss It could take four hours just to reel in Set the reel on drag and watch it spin Some folks say it’s the thrill of the catch There’s so much fun in the sparring match A battle between woman and fish Three-hundred-pound prey, no better dish The best reward comes at dinnertime Succulent fare in sauce made of lime Some can’t relate and I understand But fresh-caught fish is better than canned From the Gulf Stream straight to the table This adventure requires no fable Working out with weights ‘fore I embark Knowing swordfish are no easy mark Snorkeling too at Tortuga reef Expectations are beyond belief My idea of a perfect vacation is slated for May 30 to June 1. Entry for Carol Brown’s “It’s Time for a Vacation” contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/7/2011 12:02:00 PM
GREAT idea for this contest theme, Carolyn. Congrats on your high honor!
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Date: 5/7/2011 10:23:00 AM
Congrats on a great poem and win......George
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Date: 5/6/2011 2:33:00 PM
Creative win..Sara
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Date: 5/5/2011 10:11:00 PM
This is a super fine example of travel on sea. Many congrats Carolyn for this top win.
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:22:00 PM
oh, the singular experience of this journey, carols...congrats for topping the chart; wonderfl piece.. :) huggs!
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Date: 5/5/2011 5:53:00 PM
Carolyn, sounds like an action packed trip and vacation. Be sure you're tied down before the big one strikes, Congratulations on your honored place in the pack. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/5/2011 4:10:00 PM
Have a wonderful time on your vacation, Carolyn. I can see the sun glistening on that beautiful water in the Keys. Many congrats on your first place win with this vivid adventure. Love, Lainie
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Date: 5/5/2011 2:05:00 PM
Carolyn, So basically you are saying that in order to catch the KIND of fish on your trip, you have to work out? Wow, girl! I knew fishing was a sport!! It sounds as though u are an adventurous woman who can eloquently share her experiences through fabulous poetry! You wrote a great one again. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:24:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st Place win. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:49:00 PM
Congrats on your deserved win!
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:30:00 PM
congrats on your win..cory
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:16:00 PM
Excellent job. Congrats
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your 1st place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2011 12:38:00 PM
Totally unfair! I want to take this vacation with you. Have a great time and good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:29:00 AM
Wow Carolyn ! Not only is this a fine write, but it says so much about the artist writing it ! You go girlie....fish'n for sword, you...you must be one healthy soul ! I loved the write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week my dear Carolyn....much love, james
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Date: 4/21/2011 6:12:00 AM
Carolyn, That is me below..It went to login when I validated..That is what caused the abnormal comment with my name missing under the shape of a person....Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 4/20/2011 10:57:00 PM
Very nice poem here. I like to fish too but completely a mere novice. You sound like you know what you are doing. I loved the way this flows. Very nice rhymes.
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Date: 4/20/2011 5:40:00 PM
very nice would love to go.. Been a hard day and when I read your comments it made me feel better so thank you.. have a great night..cory
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Date: 4/20/2011 2:13:00 PM
"Fresh caught fish is better than canned." Wow! You can say that again. In Michigan some like to go to Red Lobster, but I think you have to be by the ocean to get good seafood at a restaurant. I stay away from Red Lobster. This should win the contest. Love, Dave
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Date: 4/20/2011 12:36:00 PM
awesome, hope you took some pictures, best of luck in the contest Carolyn
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Date: 4/20/2011 11:57:00 AM
wow what a piece you wrote here. for one thing i envy you. would love a vacation such as that. I have seen swordfish at the store, now i know that fresh caught is better, but i have never had swordfish what does it taste like? Also this pome reminds me of a Jerry Lewis movie, where he is telling this story while on this table with a swordfish with the sword all the way through him. this was a great piece you wrote. thank you for commenting on Sweet Erika, she has not seen the poem yet.
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Date: 4/20/2011 10:59:00 AM
This sounds pretty awesome Carolyn, really enjoyed this glimpse into your vacation of choice ;) wishing you all the best for Carol's contest.. Love ya Wilma
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Date: 4/20/2011 10:27:00 AM
I love it Carolyn!thank you for sharing your experience at sea-kash
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Date: 4/20/2011 10:25:00 AM
LOL - sounds like fun, but I think listening to your adventures is enough for me : ) Glad you're having so much fun - and relieved to hear you're both OK - I saw the devastation from the hurricanes on the news. Scary.
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