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Guessing His Name Will Save My Child

This Rumpelstiltskin, he does rattle brains. The spin of the straw is a golden pain. Oh lies to the king! My child of a fling. This imp of a name, it must become plain. I watch all the day and the night afraid And gather the smartest of kingdom aid. The flames of his rage His name on the stage. The glean from the spin, it is left unpaid. 1/28/2019

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Date: 2/2/2019 7:16:00 PM
Perfect Limerick, Kim, I enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2019 8:03:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 2/1/2019 2:34:00 PM
you wove the story very well, many congrats on your win Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2019 10:13:00 AM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 2/1/2019 12:22:00 PM
Nicely done, Kim. Congratulations your your great win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2019 10:12:00 AM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Date: 1/29/2019 11:29:00 PM
Very good set of limericks Kim. Great to read - thank you Kim - Lindsay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2019 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, Lindsay!
Date: 1/29/2019 9:27:00 PM
Kim, I think you remembered this tale really well. Good luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2019 9:42:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!

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