Guess I'M Getting Old

GUESS I'M GETTING OLD

Woke up this morning,
And can't turn over,
Because of the pain,
In my hip and my shoulder.

Finally drag myself,
Out of the bed,
Limp into the bathroom,
This head fog to shed.

Soak out the pain,
In a nice warm bath,
Dry my hair and shake off,
Last night's aftermath.

There's someone in my mirror,
That can't be me,
She's wrinkled and old,
And can hardly see.

Ignore her and maybe,
She'll just go away,
But I'm kidding myself,
That old bat's here to stay.

Now I'm dressed and I'm ready,
To begin my day,
Feed the cat, walk the dog,
Run some errands and play.

By the end of the day,
I'm limping again,
It's the price I must pay,
For a life fillled with sin.

My leg hurts, my neck hurts,
There's pain in my head,
But pain can be good,
'Cause it means I'm not dead;

                Yet.

                                               Judy Ball
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 7/15/2011 10:28:00 AM
It would be funny BUT I so identify with this write??? Who is that I think my Mom? Think of it this way we will never loose the memory of Mother...thanks so much for your comments! Light & Love
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/15/2011 10:52:00 AM
Thats for sure mu friend. Thanks so much for stopping by. Glad you liked this. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/12/2011 8:14:00 PM
there something wonderful about this. i just cant find it. john
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/12/2011 9:11:00 PM
lol It's just life. Thanks for stopping by. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/12/2011 5:26:00 AM
oh man! the title caught me couse I wanted to see who else this torment was affecting and instead I see you are writing about me. So who told you? Really cool poem Judy. I enjoyed it. I shall leave you with words from an old friend of mine who said "I'm not old I'm simply entering the youth of my old age". : ) great poem Judy thandk for the smiles
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/12/2011 6:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Robeert but the poem is about me. I ain't no spring chicken no moe, no moe. So glad you enjooyed it. Thanks for stopping by. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/11/2011 11:51:00 PM
Sadly, I can relate to this!!! (aw, come on, I bet you did not sin so much!!) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/12/2011 7:11:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. So glad you enjoyed this piece.Thanks bunches and have a great day. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/11/2011 11:51:00 PM
by the way, it was very cute and I enjoyed it.
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Date: 7/12/2011 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Glad it gave you a giggle. Hugs, JB
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