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This poem is somewhat burlesque but the ironic word play is meant to be light and funny. There's hidden meaning in some phrases... I hope you enjoy it! <3

Before, when I was afraid to be me, I looked at others and tried to be a copy. Mimic all their motions, repeat the same moves... Maybe then I can follow all their rules? I tried to not be so different, so lame, but being a replica just wasn't the same! No matter how hard I would try, all my hellos looked like goodbyes! My left was a little too right, my dark had too much light. All my stands were full of sitters, my all alones had visitors! I learned following where others lead, will never let your YOU be free! So I'll be the ‘You’ who was made exactly. I won't let others additions subtract me. I'll allow my no mores to be agains, I'll be just exactly who I am!

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Date: 8/29/2024 8:55:00 PM
Oh you sound like a fun person! Let you be you!!!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/12/2024 8:03:00 AM
Thank you!! Xo
Date: 6/9/2024 6:40:00 AM
This is quite relatable. Spent a lot of my life being an altered, chained version of myself. Not so much now. :) This was a good read, Crystol.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/9/2024 9:09:00 AM
I'm so glad you were able to relate. Especially since you've broken out of those chains! I still struggle occasionally with wanting to please but I'm more aware now at least. Ty for chiming in! Xo
Date: 6/8/2024 5:43:00 AM
I'll bet you're a fun, sweet person just as you (now) are. I never was one to follow trends. Material things don't interest me and I don't idolize anyone. I'm just me
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/8/2024 12:29:00 PM
That's so nice! Ty! And you are just exactly who you were meant to be too. Xo

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