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Guardian Spirits

the chill of  tombstone
resists the fall of jade lawn
cross entrusted perch
eagle guardian spirit  
haunt the field of past mourning

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Elaine George

Date: 8/13/2011 7:29:00 AM

Haunatingly beautiful, Deb.Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2011 11:49:00 PM

Not sure your place but I see you won. Congratulations. I especially liked your last two lines, great summing up!!

Kash Poet

Date: 8/11/2011 9:01:00 PM

Very nice...Congrats Debbie on your win in Carolyn's contest.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/11/2011 3:44:00 PM

Hey there Deb, congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest ;)

David Williams

Date: 8/11/2011 1:56:00 PM

hey Debbie, congrats on your win, David

Jack Horne

Date: 8/11/2011 1:29:00 PM

Many conrats to you, Debs : )

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/11/2011 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations Debbie and thank you for your comments. I keep getting shut out so am slow in answering. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/11/2011 10:55:00 AM

congrats on your win in the contest Debbie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/11/2011 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn,Debbie

John Freeman

Date: 8/11/2011 7:46:00 AM

A stellar write Debbie, Nice job. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2011 7:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest Debbie. Love,Carol

Don Johnson

Date: 8/10/2011 7:30:00 PM

The bird is there, of souls the care, and spirits are arising:(

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/10/2011 4:16:00 PM

in a true tanka style....only you have truly followed form. Well done, Debbie...this is hauntingly beautiful. Congrats!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/10/2011 3:57:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win in the contest luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/10/2011 3:48:00 PM

You really created the atmosphere in the cemetery so well, Deb, and I adore the last line. Congratulations on your win in the Bald Eagle in the Cemetery contest! I judged blindly and there were many great entries, so you should feel proud. Love, Carolyn