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sizzling desert sun roadrunner takes refuge ‘neath cool cactus shadows Written on 9/2/2021

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Elaine George

Date: 9/17/2021 4:38:00 AM

Ah! The road runner... I can see him yet. He brought me many a good laughs over the years. A great Haiku you have constructed here, Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/19/2021 7:45:00 AM

Thank you, Elaine :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/11/2021 9:07:00 AM

Love the contrast of the desert sun and cactus shadow, Laura, and congrats on your win~

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/11/2021 1:00:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle! Happy you liked it! :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/8/2021 8:36:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your beautiful Haiku, well done ~ love and serenity _ Constance

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/8/2021 8:50:00 PM

Thank you for my placement in your contest, Connie! I’m very happy you liked it! :)

Elaine George

Date: 9/7/2021 12:13:00 AM

Many congrats, Laura. Very fine Haiku.

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/8/2021 8:15:00 AM

Thank you, Elaine. So happy you liked this one! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/6/2021 11:22:00 AM

Love the contrasting imagery, Laura! Congratulations!

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/6/2021 1:36:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! So buyouts liked this one! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2021 8:12:00 PM

I like this image, Laura. congrats on your win

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/6/2021 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I’m glad you liked this :)