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Growing Pains

dandelion child

                                                               simply trusting
                                                             eyes  wide - open 
                                                           ready  to  accept and
                                                          give:   a powder - puff
                                                             to  scatter  seeds
                                                                 of  virgin love
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Date: 1/16/2014 11:01:00 PM
Very creative. Normally I don't like shaped poems but I like yours a lot!
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Karen Ruff
Date: 1/17/2014 6:28:00 AM
Thanks. Appreciate the feedback.
Date: 1/13/2014 10:30:00 AM
Chains of stems connecting your laughter to mine..Hope I got the wordings right? : ) A very creative post..and I love the flower and the message in bloom..Welcome to PS : )
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Karen Ruff
Date: 1/13/2014 1:53:00 PM
Yes, you got it right. the words on the sides are supposed to look like the leaves on the stem. Thanks for reading.
Date: 1/12/2014 10:02:00 PM
WOW I just love the poem and your use of it thank you
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