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Growing Older

G rowing older isn't funny. R usty pipes don't work as well. O ver-worked mind moves much slower, W ords won't come, my tale to tell. I was once an active youngster, N ot a creek was in my step. G one the child I was forever. O h I miss her youthful pep. L ots of folks are proud to tell you, D ates and birthdays don't mean much. E ach new day brings us a sweeter R ipeness that the young can't touch. For Acrostic challenge

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Date: 5/30/2010 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM win in Jared's Acrostic Contest, Joyce! Enjoy it...I intend to grow old gracefully...happy and contented.....Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 5/25/2010 11:27:00 AM
Joyce, it makes growing older much more appealing reading your words. Many congratulations on your fine win in Jared's contest >> James
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Date: 5/20/2010 5:31:00 PM
Joyce, I knew this one would fare well in the contest. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Joe
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Date: 5/20/2010 2:13:00 PM
this should have been in top five somewhere, for sure!! But congrats on your HM, dear. Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/20/2010 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest Joyce. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:32:00 PM
This is wonderful. I can really relate the older I get. I hope it does well in the contest. As for my dark poet, that was an oldie that is actually called Dragon child. haha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:03:00 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Joyce. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 5:38:00 PM
"Rusty pipes don't work as well." Love that line! Great acrostic. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/18/2010 3:14:00 PM
Oh, I love the topic you chose and this is a wonderful acrostic, Joyce!! Every year we take a step closer to that "sweeter ripeness." What a great way to think about aging -- kind of like a fine wine! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2010 1:36:00 PM
Sure am glad I've decided not to Grow Older. This was a fun read - if it weren't based in truth!!! Good luck in the contest. Joe
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