Growing Older

G rowing older isn't funny.
R usty pipes don't work as well.
O ver-worked mind moves much slower,
W ords won't come, my tale to tell.
I was once an active youngster,
N ot a creek was in my step.
G one the child I was forever.

O h I miss her youthful  pep.
L ots of folks are proud to tell you,
D ates and birthdays don't mean much.
E ach new day brings us a sweeter
R ipeness that the young can't touch.


For Acrostic challenge
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Haick Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 2:41 PM
Congratulations on your HM win in Jared's Acrostic Contest, Joyce! Enjoy it...I intend to grow old gracefully...happy and contented.....Peace, love, Audrey
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May 25, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Joyce, it makes growing older much more appealing reading your words. Many congratulations on your fine win in Jared's contest >> James
Flach Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 5:31 PM
Joyce, I knew this one would fare well in the contest. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Joe
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 2:13 PM
this should have been in top five somewhere, for sure!! But congrats on your HM, dear. Luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest Joyce. Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:32 PM
This is wonderful. I can really relate the older I get. I hope it does well in the contest. As for my dark poet, that was an oldie that is actually called Dragon child. haha. LUv, andrea
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:03 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Joyce. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Green Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 5:38 PM
"Rusty pipes don't work as well." Love that line! Great acrostic. Good luck in the contest.
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May 18, 2010 at 3:14 PM
Oh, I love the topic you chose and this is a wonderful acrostic, Joyce!! Every year we take a step closer to that "sweeter ripeness." What a great way to think about aging -- kind of like a fine wine! Love, Carolyn
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May 18, 2010 at 1:36 PM
Sure am glad I've decided not to Grow Older. This was a fun read - if it weren't based in truth!!! Good luck in the contest. Joe
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