Groupie

she wanted something that sunglasses couldn’t see 
and the first taste I could give her 
of what her eyes were looking for 
was something like a silver jet flyin’ 
carryin’ blueberries 
‘cross the sky 
to her favorite rock star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Williams Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 9:45 AM
Really am enjoying your "take" on it all ....
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April 26, 2009 at 1:53 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Enjoyed that you made your point in a concise way. The language is fitting for the topic. Creative approach. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good week! Karen
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March 3, 2009 at 11:45 AM
I don't ever like short poems as much as Il ike this one!! Solid bit of writing in just a few words. Well done!! Much love, Steve
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