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she wanted something that sunglasses couldn’t see and the first taste I could give her of what her eyes were looking for was something like a silver jet flyin’ carryin’ blueberries ‘cross the sky to her favorite rock star

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/2/2009 9:45:00 AM
Really am enjoying your "take" on it all ....
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:53:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Enjoyed that you made your point in a concise way. The language is fitting for the topic. Creative approach. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good week! Karen
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Date: 3/3/2009 11:45:00 AM
I don't ever like short poems as much as Il ike this one!! Solid bit of writing in just a few words. Well done!! Much love, Steve
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