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Group Photo With Fishermen

it’s christmas dad 
lend me once more your hand to compare ourselves 
among the living people i ever touched 
only your hand was bigger 

if you want to we can go to the seashore hand in hand 
to leap wave after wave together 
or you can take me to the puppet theater 
where the orange tiger swallows pancakes 
while we’re clapping along with our big hands 

this year i didn’t grow home bread and 
i didn’t burn candles 
i simply crouched with half-opened eyes 
leaning against high cushions 
over a cross scratched with my nails on the bed sheets 
lying in wait
fishing like you dad 
sometimes hours other times days 
go by without any catch 
apart from your pale and slippery smile 
in the last photograph 

dad 
why on earth didn’t you put aside the fishing rod

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/9/2014 12:24:00 PM
HI AGAIN CRISTINA, , Thank you so much, for the support.... A forever poetry soup joy, when congratulating all contest winners.... Enjoy your day... Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 4/1/2014 11:29:00 AM
Cristina, a nice leaping poem, warm, expressing so much ending sentiment. Deep, slippery smile, that seemed to fade... ;(... enjoyed always~ Linda
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Cristina M Moldoveanu
Date: 4/1/2014 11:43:00 AM
Your gentle words are overwhelming me Linda :) Thanks a lot for your insightful comment.

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