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Group Hugs and Raindrops

Falling so fast You're standing still Just now In this one moment Raindrops fall on my lashes I look and Is the sky breaking, or am I? Soaked Yet Weightless Everything stops when He looks at me And I smile Wild and Unrelenting as the storm. With an echoing laugh. She looks at me and Joy Pure happiness Erupt on her lips. They all stand in awe Spinning in the rain We know Solitude is freezing So we join Arms around each other Hoping Praying Wishing This moment to forever be ours.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/29/2017 8:42:00 AM
Amazing work. I really relate to the second stanza. Another mesmerizing poem. Added to the list. :)
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Iris Blade
Date: 11/29/2017 12:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris. The rain always has excited me and always will.
Date: 8/20/2017 1:19:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Iris. I've felt these same feelings of wanting to immortalize a moment. I loved the play of rain in the poem. I love rain. Thanks for your recent visit to my work. Hugs
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Iris Blade
Date: 8/21/2017 9:36:00 AM
Than you so much! I love rain too, if someone could bottle the smell and give it to me I'd be the happiest person in the world! Have a nice day.

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